| "Bulma & Vegeta's Revelations" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Ooooooh...
Reviewed By: LadyLilia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2009 02:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet and sexy.
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Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely both were great stories. Great job. Bura
PS- I enjoyed them very much. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Those were both COMPLETELY different stories! Good story though. |
Reviewed By: Brat Bulma On: January 23, 2003 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! That was a wonderful story. Vegeta and Bulma were both, I believe, in character, so the OOC thing is nothing that would change people's opinions in the story. It was exciting, sexy, full of fun! I loved reading this, and I hope that all of you other big V/B fans, like myself, will be sure that this story would go into the V/B "Library of Gr8 lemone!" Okay, that was dumb.
nuff' said |
Reviewed By: Legana On: October 28, 2002 11:18 CST
Comment/Review:
cute |
Reviewed By: Legana On: October 28, 2002 10:36 CST
Comment/Review:
sweet, if you forget that it's Vegeta. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 27, 2002 11:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit, Bulma's pov was even more intense. Her stunts to get him to notice her to me seem to be so Bulma. I mean the guy's like a fortess so she would have to take some major steps to get his attention. The lemon was superb, emotional, touching and passionate. Ok, so I lied. You the Queen of Lemons times 10. GREAT JOB GG!! |
Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72 On: October 27, 2002 06:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, that was fantastic! Sexy, emotional, it had it all! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 27, 2002 11:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Veggie's pov was beautiful and I don't think he was ooc. Maybe that's how he was with Bulma behind closed doors. And the lemon, well it was fantastic. I've said it before and I'll say it again, you are the Queen of Lemons ^_^. |
