Reviewed By: audi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, where to begin? It has been sometime since i've really enjoyed reading an original work on-line. Most of it is crumby and/or dull. Of course, it being shonen-ai makes it all the better. Yes, it's most definetly shonen-ai, and that's good, too. There's far too much 'slash' out there for my liking because slash is different than shonen-ai and yaoi.
i love your character developement and, well, your characters in general. The story idea is brilliant, it seems to be a mixture of all sorts of things that i can't place, but i like the combination.
Keep up up -- next chapter onegai!! |
