| "Deep in the Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: star-brella (not signed in) On: January 20, 2005 21:01 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm lovin' it so far. Keep on going.
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Reviewed By: Sinu-yasha On: March 14, 2003 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this has to be one of the greatest fanfics i've ever read why did ya stop writing!!??!?!?! |
Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story, I like it!
Keep it going,
Kinoko |
Reviewed By: Ultima [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 14:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very unique fic. what is going to happen in the next chapter, and when.? |
Reviewed By: Ultima [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is a good twist to the story and i want to read more. so what's up? |
Reviewed By: Hybrid On: December 08, 2002 04:04 CST
Comment/Review:
Damn... Stupid Kakkarot...grrr
^_^ Goten and Trunks are cool they are so cute!!!
I hope you update soon cos this story is cool!! |
Reviewed By: DarkBulma On: November 18, 2002 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was funny! Yeah i agree with Mushi_azn! You should make it bulma's thong. Or just let it be Videl's thong and then Mr. Satan finds out about that!Then maybe make to where Hercule has one of Bulmas thong's! lol i can just imagne it now hehe! It wouldnt make him any better than Gohan! LoL even though it is those two little angels Goten and Trunks. (yea right angels my ass)
That do it to Gohan! Yeah i would love to see the look on Goku's face to see his son in a thong! LoL God you gotta love Trunks and Goten! Please update soon! LMMFAO! -_^*!!! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 23:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg omg omg!! continue!! THIS IS SOOOO GOOD!!
mind if I make a sugustion??? you know that thong Trunk's found?? Make it Bulma's!! (like I dunno, maybe Vegeta and Bulma flew there b4, and....you know, did the taboo!! ;) ) So when Vegeta finds it in Gohan's bag.....*evil grin*
CONTINUE!!!! |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 15:42 CST
Comment/Review:
He He! That's funny, I can't wait for the upcoming chapters! |
Reviewed By: raska [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol! you rock! I love the interplay between bulma and hercule. What's vegeta going to do to Hercule when he finds out? Videl's attitude is right on, trunks and goten are up to no good, as usual. Very fun, intelligent, and entertaining read. Can you put me on your mailing list? |
Reviewed By: DarkBulma On: November 15, 2002 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I like,I like! Thats was funny and great. I vote for Goku! To be in the next chapter! Oh man i really cant wait til vegeta finds out about videl's dad hiting on his WOMAN!!!! as he would put it! LoL hey when vegeta does find out, you should make it where vegeta sees hercule putting the moves on bulma! Oh there is goin to be some ass's beat! LOL i cant wait! please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Ice On: November 14, 2002 21:30 CST
Comment/Review:
You shouldn't add Goku that would ruin the whole outing you should make it so that the trouble makers (Goten and Trunks) find the dragonballs and wish for their Uncles Turles and someone else cos I don't know if Vegeta has a brother but I doubt it any way I just don't like Goku so it's your story do whatever you want. I only keep loving the story if you keep updating cos I love updates!!! ^_^ Have fun!! |
Reviewed By: Lol On: November 14, 2002 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GET VEGETA TO KICK HERCULES ASS. LOL THIS IS A GREAT FAN FIC. :-) VERY GOOD PLZ CONTINUE |
Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: November 05, 2002 22:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh come on alredy!make another chappy before I die! But it is really a great story |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2002 09:44 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE IT!!!
This is HILARIOUS! I can't wait to see what Vegeta does to Hercule after he realizes his true intentions ...MWAHAHAHAHA!! And Trunks and Goten!! Hahahaa!!
Please Update Soon!!! |
