| "Breaking Point" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Terendel On: December 08, 2002 10:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice. One of the best het lemons I've seen in a very long time. I liked how you made it a triangle. I'm of the opinion that anyone who's going to love one of the boys will get stuck with both of them, so I like that you kept them all together. Good description. Scrumptious lemony goodness. What was there not to like? |
Reviewed By: NawtyDawg69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2002 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first, didn't know who anzu was, so the character kept switching, but thinking back on it, it was a great fic! Write more! |
Reviewed By: IsaacandBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I had known that you wrote breaking point I would have reviewed earlier. That was one of the best anzu, yuugi, yami triangles i have ever seen. I give it a 10/10 for all nice job. |
Reviewed By: The Real Unknown On: November 27, 2002 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic good pair good lemony-ness and it's straight keep writing fics like this |
Reviewed By: Inume On: November 26, 2002 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. I loved reading it.
That was kind of freaky when Yami came out of the puzzle though.
The end was really funny when Anzu told Yugi that he forgot to call jiisan. |
Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2002 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLLLLLLLLY SHITTTTT!!!!!!! O . O I am over here sweating on the serious tip....I loved that!!!! Congrats, you are now one of my fav authors!!! |
Reviewed By: beth On: November 21, 2002 00:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this story beginning to end. it is one of the best yugioh stories i have ever read and i hope you continue writing. and add a sequel. |
Reviewed By: ccam3 On: November 13, 2002 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lou ta da watch out now u tha great 1 and i had fun!for ch.4 |
Reviewed By: ccam3 On: November 13, 2002 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lou ta da watch out now u tha great 1 and i had fun! |
Reviewed By: ccam3 On: November 13, 2002 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
3 words:wow Wow WOW! |
Reviewed By: ccam3 On: November 12, 2002 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude first base!!AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: devilzgurl On: November 01, 2002 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was really really good!! You should write more........like this |
Reviewed By: Dragon Master Duelist On: October 31, 2002 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this one. It is a great lemon of Tea/Yugi/Yami. Great job |
Reviewed By: Starheart [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2002 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fanfic a lot!!! Please, make a sequel to this one, if possible!!! |
Reviewed By: Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2002 22:25 CST
Comment/Review:
A nice lemon . . . It's good to read a Anzu/Yugi/Yami lemon. Thanks. |
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