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Reviewed By: Girl1055 On: October 21, 2006 11:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this lemon. I think that they can go any way(YamiXTea, YugiXTea, YamiXYugi) so a threesome is nice! ^.^ This is the 2nd time i've read this and I like it just the same each time. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Kurayami Ryuu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*dies* OMG... I mean... XD That was so freakin awesome. Words cannot describe... so good. I normally avoid hentai fics like the plague, too... *total yaoi fangirl :D* This was totally sexy, but also very romantic without losing the realistic vibe or becoming overly sappy, which is something I pretty much never see; massive kudos. I loved it all, but especially the characterizations, and the fact that Anzu chose Yugi to go the whole way with. On another note, I might have found Yugi just happening to have one condom to be a little overly convenient, except... my best friend once gave me as a condom as a joke, too XD The only difference was that it wasn't anything as embarrassing as finding it in the middle of Math class, poor Yugi >_< But anyway, REALLY great fic, awesome job!
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Reviewed By: sibs On: August 11, 2005 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Just read chap 1. WHOA! Good job with the cliffhanger.
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Reviewed By: vegitoth [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 11:05 CDT
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This was completly nice and this is the very first Yugi/Anzu lemon fic I read (I left yami out because I felt that he fell in love with someone in the past) Follow your thoughts I like em.
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 06:03 CST
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this has got to be the best halfway straight lemon ever!! i read it once and just had to come back and read it again! i loooove it!
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Title: Great!!
Reviewed By: beth-28 On: September 01, 2004 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great to see these characters together in a believable situation. I can really "see" it happening.I wish I could give you a higher rating! You should really write more of these three together as their "life" moves along...., but keep 'em together no matter what is thrown at them! :-)
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Reviewed By: Bluejay2099 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 22:38 CST
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Omg! This has to be the best yugioh lemon ever written. I really mean it. This is such an awesome and powerful fic. You can tell just by reading this tat they truly care, and that makes the rest extra speial. The one and only thing that I didn't like was when Anzu started up with Yami wihout knowing how Yugi would feel about it. I don't thin she would do that without a talk... Other than that I think you managed to portray he charactoers perfectly while putting them in a situation they they have not been in before. That's though to do and ven tougher to do well. A fic half as good as this one would be excellent.
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Title: Dragon
Reviewed By: Drae On: September 23, 2003 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one of the best Fanfics I've ever read and one of the most romantic. In fact it was so good this is the first review I've ever written and I've been coming to this site for at least three months now. Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: serenitywheeler456 On: April 10, 2003 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love almost all tea/yami-yugi fics,but this one tops all the ones ive read.Believe me, Im not just saying this to flatter you.IM SEREOUS! |
Reviewed By: Belldandy On: March 06, 2003 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it. Yami/Anzu and Yugi/Anzu and all of them together just rule. Well done. |
Reviewed By: Ice On: March 01, 2003 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Nice fic Yami/Yugi and Anzu is the best!
It would be soo kewl if u made a sequal to this one! i luv it.. c ya! Font Color |
Reviewed By: Terendel On: December 08, 2002 10:16 CST
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Very nice. One of the best het lemons I've seen in a very long time. I liked how you made it a triangle. I'm of the opinion that anyone who's going to love one of the boys will get stuck with both of them, so I like that you kept them all together. Good description. Scrumptious lemony goodness. What was there not to like? |
Reviewed By: NawtyDawg69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2002 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first, didn't know who anzu was, so the character kept switching, but thinking back on it, it was a great fic! Write more! |
Reviewed By: IsaacandBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I had known that you wrote breaking point I would have reviewed earlier. That was one of the best anzu, yuugi, yami triangles i have ever seen. I give it a 10/10 for all nice job. |
Reviewed By: The Real Unknown On: November 27, 2002 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic good pair good lemony-ness and it's straight keep writing fics like this |
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