"Numb Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Ya-Ya On: April 17, 2003 15:23 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Finish the story!What happens next?! More chapters,more chapters!!! |
Reviewed By: Darcy335 On: March 16, 2003 19:42 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: baylee... it says TO BE CONTINUED... but it is the end of the story! im confused... anyways... i love relationships... no matter what gender its with! ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... though... only in stories such as yours! |
Reviewed By: Scy On: January 22, 2003 22:40 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is kicking ass. 'cept for spelling (but who am i to say i suck at it) it's kickin ass UPDATE SOON
Ja,
Scy |
Reviewed By: Mischa On: December 11, 2002 20:20 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Um...Interesting Chapter five is a little short and the spelling was off but other than that it was a really enjoyable fic please write more! |