| "NEW VERSION: "Do you remember me?"" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Reviewed By: KawaiiChiri On: January 05, 2003 18:11 CST
Comment/Review:
OH COME ON!! For cryin out loud!! REMEMBER EACH OTHER! =) Wonderful story!! Waaaaah! Continue!! Lemons.....make...lemonade! ^_^;; |
Reviewed By: Goggle Girl On: January 05, 2003 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww, awww, awww, u must continue!!!!!!!! no, i order u to continue, that is so sweet! Solo and Odin are finally reunited! yay!!! |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm using a public computer so I've little time to comment right now.
I've given you a 9 for your style of writing, because sometimes I've
You've some mistakes... but no biggie.
Originality is 10, because it's quite like an AU fiction. First start when they were little and then later turns out they're comrades [thinking that the other was dead]
I've really enjoyed it. It's kawaii... although I've not read chapter 10 yet since my personal Internet access is going weird. I can't save chapter 10 in notepad and my floppy either [that's my way of saving time]. But anyways, please write more. |
Reviewed By: SailorChibiSaturn@hotmail.com On: January 03, 2003 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this fic. I love how this is turning out. Though this going kind of slowly though. I can understand though. Genius takes time! I'll be waiting for more and can't wait to see how this fic ends! |
Reviewed By: scarlettrose On: December 30, 2002 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope the next chapter comes out soon |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 16:41 CST
Comment/Review:
exelent fic so far but theres one itty bitty little thing wrong. *Ahem* *puppy dog eyes* you havent got any more yet. *ahem* *Back to normal* and BTW does Hee-chan get mad at Duo-chan for not telling him. plz say no. i have seen too many of those and half the time they turn out crappy.
great fic,
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: Daremyth [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 15:55 CST
Comment/Review:
oy. ::glare:: SURE! leave us off with a CLIFF HANGER, why don't you?! ::vicious glare:: HURRY UP, dammit! ::blink:: ::sweet smile:: have a nice day..! ^.^
-Daremyth |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: December 22, 2002 08:16 CST
Comment/Review:
HHUUURRRRYYYYYYYYY-UUUUPPPPPPP,...MMMOOOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE CHAAAPTERRRRRRRRRRRRSSSS,...OONEGAAIIIIIIII!!^_~!! |
Reviewed By: Dark_Fox On: December 17, 2002 10:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAHHHHHHHHHHH How could u leave it there. any way cant wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Altair On: December 16, 2002 14:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Heuuuu, pleeeeeeeese more and quickly, pleeeeeease... CUTEY DUO & HEERO AGAIN... |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: December 11, 2002 04:01 CST
Comment/Review:
KKKKYYAAAHHHHHH,.....*glared*....WWWWHYYYYYY DDIIIDDDDD YYOUUUU SSSTTTOPPPPPP TTTHEREEE?????....*grumbles*...ya better continue soon or OOOMAAEEEEOOOO KKOOROOSUUUUUUUUUU,...*glared somemore*...
till next chapter,...JAAAAAAAA and GAANBBATEEEEEEEE-NEEEE!!^_~!!
p/s;and by the way,...VERRYYYYYYY GOOODDDDD fic,....LOOVEEEE IT,...1+2/2+1 FFOREEEVERRRRR!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jo K On: December 05, 2002 12:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i *love* this fic!! it's so kakkoi!! pls, pls finish it soon! i can't stand the suspense! |
Reviewed By: Homicidal Maniac [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
@. |
Reviewed By: Shinigama On: November 30, 2002 08:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You get perfect tens because that's exactly what you deserve! You're driving me nuts you have to finish it!!! Please....I'll go crazy otherwise and that is what makes a good writer if you leave your readers wanting more and believe me I do!! Pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease...I'm begging you here write more!
Shinigama
(Note: Shinigama=Goddess of Death) |
Reviewed By: Homicidal Maniac [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
where is chapter 10?! #.@ i hope u finish it soon, i'll be looking forword to it! |
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