Reviewed By: Obvious Perplexion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 03:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I like the fact that you were able to put emotions into your lemon and not make it ALL about sex. Plus, it helps that I'm totally fond of Yamajyou. ^_^. I'm off to read the sequel to this fic, since I've already read the preque;. That one rocked too.
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