| "Beautiful Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: Timber Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 05:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is going great!
Keep it up!
Keep it a 6x1!
That 13x5 sounds a good idea! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Solder Heero On: December 20, 2002 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent .
You do not find many Zech's, Heero coupling.
Continue with this fic you have a great winner here add some more Lemony goodness with the other couples. |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: December 10, 2002 23:50 CST
Comment/Review:
i'm an avid fan of 2+1/1+2,...and usualy tends to avoid reading heero or duo bein pair-up with others,..such-as duo+wufei,heero+trowa,duo+quatra,...etc,etc,etc...
but sometimes,..i would stumble upon a fic with different pairings that i found quite good,..just like yours,...heero and zech makes quite a pairing Neeee??...your story is very intresting and the plot is amazing,...full of angst and sappy momments,...with a touch of humor and not to mention VEERYYYYYYYY HHOOTTT sex scenes,....*wink*....only one thing though,....it kinda get a lil bit wierd when duo character shows-up,...because even though zech said that he and duo are history,...he still admits that he cared for duo,...and duo seems not quite over him,...the question here is;how much does zech cared for duo??...is it as a friend or a lover??...and does he really over him??...and also the thing that makes it more wierd for me to read is that usualy i read in any fic the main couple usualy tends to be duo and heero,..soo it's kinda funny to me to read heero in a relationship with someon other than duo and duo bein the ex-lover to heero love,...
sorry if i bored ya with my ramblings here,...*rubs head sheepishly*....kinda gets abit carried away sometimes,...*grins*...
ignored it kay,...all in all,...a VVERRRYYYYYYYYYYY well done fic and i LLOOOVEEEEEEE it,....hope ya keep-up the good work and continue soon,...till yer-next new chapter,....JJJAAAAAAAAAAA and GAAAANBBAATEEE-NNEEEE!!^_~!! |
Reviewed By: Dewshine On: December 09, 2002 17:11 CST
Comment/Review:
*cheers & claps wildly* You updated! You updated! Yea!!!!!
Have I mentioned that I love this fic? Well, I do! Thanks for updating, please don't stop! This is going really good! |
Reviewed By: battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2002 16:27 CST
Comment/Review:
will you be updating and adding a new chappy sooon? |
Reviewed By: Phoenix Dess On: November 27, 2002 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Michalyn, I must say that I love your fanfics, especially Beautiful Dawn. I enjoy your sophisticated style of writing and your well developed plots. I'm also impressed by the way you develop the Gundam boys into credible and fascinating characters. Moreover, I can't tell you how much I love your long and detailed lemons ~_^. Overall, your fanfics are definitely very yummy ~_^, but you make them even more interesting by adding a little more depth to the plot that othe authors usually don't bother themselves with. I don't know about anyone else, but this quality definitely makes you one of my favorite authors. I go through TONS of fanfics, and finding ones as good as yours is very hard. Keep it up! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Phoenix Dess On: November 27, 2002 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Michalyn, I must say that I love all of you're fanfics. I enjoy you're sophisticated style of writing and your well developed plots. I'm also impressed by the way you develop that Gundam boys into credible and fascinating characters, Like in Beautiful Dawn. Moreover, I can't tell you how much I love you're long and detailed lemons ~_^. Overall, you're fanfics are definitely very yummy, but you make them even more interesting by adding a bit more depth to the stories that most other authors usually don't bother themselves with. I don't know about anyone else, but this quality definitely makes you one of my favorite authors. I go through TONS of fanfics, and finding ones as good as yours is very hard. Keep it up! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Elle-FaTe2x1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 15:02 CST
Comment/Review:
wow! THIS IS GETTING REALLY REALLY GOOD! I love it and I hope Zechs can get Heero back! |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: November 08, 2002 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent style, if a little wordy. Very sensual! You've caught some very key points in the character's personalities. I'm enjoying it a lot, and looking forward to the next chapters! |
Reviewed By: Elle-FaTe2x1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 21:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Uh Oh... That doesn't dound good. I really hope Zechs and Hee-chan can work it out before Duo takes Zechs back or vice versa. I also hope you update really soon! |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 20:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Duo... ooo... things look like they're getting more complicated! I can't wait to read more, please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Timber Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
6x1 are so hard to find.
This is one of the best yaoi fics I have read!
A beautiful story and beautifully told! |
Reviewed By: Timber Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
6x1 are so hard to find.
This is one of the best yaoi fics I have read!
A beautiful story and beautifully told! |
Reviewed By: LadyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
for some odd reason I was thinking maybe Duo was dead....anyway makes me wonder why Duo's in the picture and if anything is going to happen between Heero and Zechs of if this has suddenly become a Duo/Zechs fic.
Write more soon please. Great job, the only errors I found were a few speeling and punctuation ones, nothing major though. |
Reviewed By: battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 10:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Yo!! Update, Update!! |
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