| "Snowstorm" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 03:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good story. Very intrueging, I couldn't stop reading until I got to the end. Also, a very cute, sweet ending. I love a good Touma and Seiji fan fiction.
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Reviewed By: Destiny's lot On: June 07, 2003 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
What?! You stopped there!? You can't what's going to happen next? Please continue I'll be checkin' for it. |
Reviewed By: Life the Fay [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 20:04 CST
Comment/Review:
That is so sad...so sad but yet, good. Please continue! |
Reviewed By: Nightfall On: December 05, 2002 15:29 CST
Comment/Review:
This is my review to encourage you to write more!!! ^_^
C'mon, put out another chapter! :-P |
Reviewed By: Wildefyre [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 10:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Please don't leave me hanging? You have got to post the next chapter!! Please? *Gives big chibi eyes* I love this fic and I need to know that my Seijikins and Tou-san are okay!!! I WANT MORE!!! |
Reviewed By: Wildefyre [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2002 22:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice to see that this fic is coming up over here as well. If people have a problem with your English then they need to take a step back and realize that you are translating these so that we can read them. They may sound great and correct in your native language but one has to realize that certain meanings do get lost in a translation.
Personally I was quite able to read this despite the spelling/grammar errors so please don't worry. One correction I do feel compelled to make is Nasutei, which you had spelled as Nasutey... Other then that I will wait patiently for the other chapters. |
