| "girlguide cookies" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: Wrong rating
Reviewed By: Callie1075 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hi! I just wanted you to know, that I loved this story even before I registered here... But I hate the rating. -_-;; It's R at most, PG-13 at least. So please change it. *begs* Oh! And this is for you! *throws you a grenade launcher* Use it well...
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Reviewed By: Dark Necrofear On: June 20, 2004 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story was funny and good but you could have at least put some more lemonlyness to it but overall it was good, so please write more. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 02:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a PG13 at best... There was no lemon, only bad language... Wow... I see you went for the script style of writing... How original, if you want to call it that... Your attempt at humor came of as rather vulgar to me as well... I feel that you need to re-think many of your stratagies here... What you're doing now, doesn't seem to be working.
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 15:38 CST
Comment/Review:
*laughing so hard can not review like she ment to*
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Reviewed By: Kingdom Hospital On: March 12, 2004 06:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This was soooo funny! It kind of reminded me of Home Alone 2! It was GREAT! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: The Future Schuyler On: March 11, 2004 02:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This really isn't NC-17, more like PG-13. If you switch the ratings, maybe more people will read it. ^_^ This was FUNNY! CONTINUE WRITING!
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: March 01, 2004 15:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Yeah the cookies are good. (used to sell them) Story is good. Adios!
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Reviewed By: RyokoMink On: October 13, 2003 11:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heh, heh... girl guide cookies... That's great I needed to laugh... Never play video games for 12 hours!! Love your stories. Bye! ^_^
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Reviewed By: a hobo with a sword [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.....pointless weird i love it!!!!!!! it's ramdom and pointless just like me!!!!! i mean look at my name!!!!good job! phwee!! |
Reviewed By: GOODwriter123456 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 22:20 CST
Comment/Review:
that was quirky, scary, and disturbing......... I love it!!! |
Reviewed By: dustymonkeyangel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL LOL LOL LOL IT WAS SO FUNNY AND AWSOME I LOVED IT LOL Keep writen FUNNY stories to keep us entertained cause i LOVE THEM!! LOL |
Reviewed By: Mimi On: November 04, 2002 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really hilarious and I simply love it. It especially saved me because I needed a good laugh today! Im also a fan-fic writer, e-mail me anytime! BountyHuntressX@aol.com |
