| "Sins of the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: LS On: February 02, 2003 20:45 CST
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This was so fun!! You do a great job w/ Amma, Sousan, and Pheas...I love the relationships...and familiarity...very easy to fall right in w/ them...Great story!! |
Reviewed By: LS On: February 02, 2003 19:12 CST
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Ahhhh! Norak is such a jerk!! I love it when Amma socks him hehe. You do a good job creating that air of agitation between them...I find myself just *hating* him too ha! |
Reviewed By: LS On: February 02, 2003 17:35 CST
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I like the interraction between Goten & Amma...This story is fun! |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 09:27 CST
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Wow another SMK original. I loved it. Bulma speech to Vegeta about pride was great. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2002 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good fic and I loved it. |
Reviewed By: little-princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2002 11:30 CST
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I like this! Is Bulma going to be alright? Is Vegeta going to give in to save his woman? C'mon, continue soon. I wanna find out! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 13:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I should have reviewed befor...but I've been lazy. This is a very god fic. Original, unique, and very well written. I can't wait for the next update! |
Reviewed By: King_Of_Nosgoth On: November 28, 2002 10:54 CST
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Wow, just... Wow! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the eps gezz they are that good better than mine lol keep up the good work and i can't wait to read more |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2002 02:48 CST
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"Planet Me." *giggles* Actually I'm impressed at Vegeta's restraint so far - so the clicker-thingy causes pain? Big Deal. He's probably been through more pain than that device is capable of inflicting... Well, I look forward to seeing his friends and family try to save him from himself. n_n |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: November 07, 2002 18:59 CST
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I know this takes place after the Buu saga. Namecks might testify in favor of Vegita since the events of Buu saga and that might help him and King Kai,fusied verison of Suprme Ki and whats his name can also tstsify in favor of Vegita. You do know Goku can find Vegita's Ki and can telport into the spaceship and learn about the situation there. I would like to see other members of Dragonball Z like Gohan,Kruion,Yamcha,etc testify in behalf of Vegita. I think it's time for Trunks to learn what his father is like before he changed. Please write chapter 7 of this fic very quickly! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chaps want more |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2002 23:56 CST
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this cool but i would like to see goku pop in on Vegeta and make him tell him what is going on he he. well any way this is good keep it up |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2002 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this story so much that i went to ff.net to read more ...
PLEASE!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! It is SOOO GOOD!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!! DON'T LEAVE ME IN THE DARK!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! |
