| "The One You Love..." Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Somebody Else [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 17:57 CST
Comment/Review:
if you wrote something original, you could make millions. i had to wait a few moments after reading this before i could review. it's so... *sniffles* wonderful. i'm sure i should be constructive and point out a flaw or something but there are none. you are a perfect writer. and you really should tell people to keep tissues handy. |
Reviewed By: Hotaru-chan On: December 23, 2002 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this...the beginning is like the stuff I write...hehe. It's a good theory though..I think it works..plus I can imagine Ken would be the best father in the world...and the thought of his son and Daisuke's son playing and fighting is very kawaii ^_~ |
