"Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shino Ryu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 23:13 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Please get more out soon. |
Reviewed By: Arrow_Windrider [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 20:14 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love the fic, definatly didn't see many things comming in this fic. I have one thing to say though, Write more soon. thank you |
Reviewed By: Foxy Tai On: January 14, 2003 18:42 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I read your story on FF.net, I like the coulpe Takato and Kari (Yes you did get me in to it). and i know your not one for finshing storys but you GOT to finsh this one I've been waiting fo little over a year now. Sorry for all the T.K and Kari fans but i like every one Except T.K with Kari, so T.K should NOT be the one to always SAVE Kari, Karis a women, and women are strong and thtat means they dont need man there 24-7.
Any way GREAT story, cant wait in till you decide to post up the next part of this story.
When you do E-mail me ^_^
Tod525@aol.com |
Reviewed By: cat On: December 13, 2002 22:21 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Gr8 story!!!!!!!!!!! Can`t wait for nxt post |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 13:55 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i havent seen a nc-17 like this one in a while! now THIS i REALLY like! im a takeru and hikari fan, and i usually like the ones that follow the digimon story, but this is definetly an exeption! ryo akiyama? hm... i neva thought about that... hes definetly VERY OOC here... is takeru gonna come in at all? interesting plot... i think it COULD be a bit more descriptive, though... get the next chapter up soon... im haveing high hopes 4 this one... |
Reviewed By: John Surber On: November 04, 2002 16:06 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: It's an interesting twist on a typical Digimon season x-over. The characters are in a unique (for them) situation and are fully integrated into that world while still having their core personalities regardless of wheather they are heroes or villains. Also the twist of having Takato rescue Kari was very good, a definite stand out from having T.K. being Kari's hero. I'd like to see where this goes. |
Reviewed By: Princess Kitana On: November 03, 2002 15:44 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great fic! Although I like Kari to be with TK, I guess that would've never worked since Matt was one of those Takers or whatever! I really didn't see that coming or that Takato would be the one to buy her. Love ur fic, can't wait for the next installment.
Princess Kitana
Kitana82483@aol.com |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 10:05 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: argh... it still hasnt been update yet! kuso... o well i read it again anywayz. pls update sooooon! or else! o'.'o |
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