| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your writing. To be honest I almost wlaked away at the beginning but once takato showed up I stuck around. Looks like you've abandoned it though. Too bad it was getting good. Oh and Bill, what did you expect? read the damn summaries. It's about slave training not fluffy bunnies. I understand you not liking rape and torture fics but that's no reason to insult someone. I don't like them much better but it has a happy...semi ending. Try reading the whole thing then complain. No offense to you but flaming people because you don't like a genre is not the way to do this. If his stile of writing was bad...okay but he moved me and apparently you to anger and disgust at what was happening to Kari. This man is good at what he does. I hope you come back to this fic so many people just seem to leave me hanging right where it gets good.
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Reviewed By: Bill Everyman On: August 20, 2005 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE A SADISTIC BASTARD I ABSOLUTLY HATE RARPE AND TOURTURE FIC YOU MAKE ME SICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Twin-dragon On: January 14, 2005 09:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE MORE GODDAMNIT!!! HOW LONG ARE YOU GOING TO KEEP ME HANGING?!!!!!
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Reviewed By: crazy eyes On: September 14, 2004 17:04 CDT
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dude.. ive been waiting almost 6 months for you to update, and i know others have been waiting even longer. please update!!! we all want to know how itll turn out!
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Reviewed By: Cherry Dragon On: April 15, 2004 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Where are you?! hello? update pelzzz????
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Reviewed By: Kina [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 16:19 CST
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ok. This is getting really old. I know it's hard to come up with new things to write about but this is really ridiculous. I write fanfics to and i get horrible writers blocks, however, i don't leave my fans hanging week after week. So i'd really like to finish the rest of your story if you'd like to write more. I enjoy reading it and can't wait to see how kari's romance with the new master will bloom.
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Reviewed By: An Idiot On: February 27, 2004 13:15 CST
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When will you continue this? I find it interesting, although sad that Hikari had to go through all that, but I'm glad that she has a kindly master. I just can't help but wonder where you're going to go with this. It feels like you're setting the stage for something else to happen. I assume that you'll explain more in the next chapter, but I can't help wonder about that.
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Enchanted One On: February 21, 2004 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello Warwolf, This was a wonderful story. I truly enjoyed it, overall it was very interesting and I would love to see more of this, seeing as you haven't finished it, or have you? Cliff hanger, possibly. In any case the way you right made me feel for the character, the pain, compassion, and intelligence in it was exceptional. I must say you have an outstanding talent for writting, maybe I am wrong, I am not an expert but I think it was amazing! Good job keep writting!
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Reviewed By: Kina [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 17:14 CST
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HEY! Where are the updates. I'm waiting!!!
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Reviewed By: Kina [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 12:30 CST
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please?
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Reviewed By: Kina [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 12:29 CST
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Next chapter? P
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Reviewed By: anonymous2 On: December 20, 2003 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i found this fic really interesting and i'd like to see more but one question. Where can you find this 'embryonic' by arch nemesis?? if anyone else knows plz email evo105@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Kina [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 16:57 CST
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First, I have to say what a horrible thing to happen to a girl, especially Kari. This was a very well written story despite the dark nature. I don't usually read fanfics so scary(I have a problem with rape) but the romance peaked my curiosity, so i read it and i have to say i enjoyed it and am going to check in on it when you update. Keep up the creative writting.
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Reviewed By: john hawk On: December 09, 2003 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great fanfic, though im not one for rape this fanfic has caught my interest, good job, cant wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Cherry Dragon On: November 28, 2003 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When is the next chapter coming? Good chapter by the way!
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