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| "The Return" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] | Reviewed By: noodlemonster [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2009 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
overall a decent fic so far. it suffers from a few big faults though. characters are quite bland overall. ranma is so ooc it isn't all that fun to read anymore. there's no more attitude of being the best, instead now he seems almost scared. the fact that he let's the company get away with almost assassinating him and then continuously drive home the fact that they could bring major weapons to bare on him, and all this without him destroying anything of theirs just doesn't make this a ranma story anymore. there are stories were ranma is a dark bastard, a good angel, etc etc but in all of them ranma still retains some of his ranmaness. in this one, you might as well have taken a random guy off the street to model ranma's personality after him.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 16:22 CST
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It's been over 2 years since last update, but this story still beyond rocks. Truth, it took over 2 days for me to read through everything you already poste,d but damn, if this story is not awesome. Anyway, please, please, please update soon, I'd love to see more chapters of this story. And if the plot bunnies have dissappeared, then, it happens. But I still love this story.
| Reviewed By: Grand_Crusader [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 22:45 CDT
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Oh my holy mother of God. You've crossed Neon Genesis Evangelion, Ranma 1/2, Hellboy (DarkStar looks very much like the Boy from Hell), and thrown the Sailor Senshi in for flavor! You're a twisted fuck...and I like it:D Keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Lord Aries Greymon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 12:26 CDT
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Hmmm, I think this to be a brilliant work of fiction. Though for the life of me, I cannot understand how becoming a demon could change a person so much. Wait, yes I can. Ranma? Yes, I could understand him. Even why he hates Pluto. Yes, I also realize that Akane is returning to her old self. [Mostly.] I think, were Tatewaki to become any form of demon, that his mind would fry. Though that is because he was, well, not exactly stable to begin with. Sincerely, Lord Aries Greymon
| Reviewed By: lightspire On: March 28, 2004 11:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
One thing that I had a problem with is that a lot of the characters seem to talk, act, and think the same. While that keeps them all in line for the mood of the story, it doesn't necessarily broaden the characters personalities much, although, I must admit, that as the story moves along, it does seem to get a little deeper with some characters. But the story as a whole just has a good atmosphere(sp), and generally keeps to it. Over all, still pretty good, as far as I'm concerned. (Though I ain't no critic...) Seriously, though, it does delve a good bit into intrigue and mystery, and continues to throw in hooks to reel you into it. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Canis Black (Who is too lazy to log in) On: September 11, 2003 19:28 CDT
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Great chapter. Your writing is really engaging and deep. I hope to see this fic and your other one that I have read, Generation Lost, continued with the same quality of story telling in the near future. | Reviewed By: Macross_VF1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 14:00 CDT
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I've been meaning to read this story for quite some time although I have never really found the time to do it. Oh well, now that I have read it I must say that I find it quite intersting. It's such a heavy divergence that it almost could be classified as an alternate universe story. In any case, just keep the good work up. | Reviewed By: Chi Vayne On: September 09, 2003 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best fics out there. OriginalEven the demons and sailor senshi don't detract from the feel of cold war spy novel, with plots within plots and having no-one to trust. | Reviewed By: Caliban On: August 01, 2003 00:43 CDT
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Read this at the Lost Library first off: good stuff so far, plenty of personal tension all round. Ranma seems a little introspective, but that's common to your other stuff ( which is also a good read ). More!
"Murdock" makes me think of the A-Team though ;) | Reviewed By: Jason On: March 09, 2003 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was fun to read becuse it was the frist time I red were Ranma trun into a femail demon. The name Drak Star was greativ. | Reviewed By: Saberwulfe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 09:46 CST
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I like your story! Because it has Canada in it!
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