| "Ten no Ai" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this. Your passion for them really shows in your writing and how you have them interact. Please keep writing you're doing a wonderful job.
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Reviewed By: Leiko (fanfic.net) On: April 19, 2003 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
style of writing was really good, you kept me interested in the WHOLE fic, and not just *cough* some parts.
Spelling, noticed a few spelling errors, but nothing much, and I dont really care for spelling much either, as long as it's readible, it's ok for me.
Originality; It was original in a way, you are one of the few people that actually let us know what happened AFTER they confess their love to eachother. And the whole going to heaven thing was pretty original too.
Enjoyment Factor; I really enjoyed this ficcy, not just thinking hentai! the last 2 chapters were really good, and, yea, I was sad it had ended too. *sniffle*
ok. *yawn* It's getting a bit late and I'm getting all tired, so I am not going to spellcheck this thing, just send it in, hope it's readable.
~Steph~ |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS A VERY DELICIOUS STORY!!! I read your commenting about one of your pictures at the yaoi hotel and I realized.. that's one story I've never read before. I will tell you, that was one of the best I've read in a long time. I really loved the way you delved into the minds of each character and told what they were thinking. I understand how a writer can put a lot of feeling into a story.. I do the same with mine. You have certaintly left me with something to think about as I go to bed tonight, which is a good thing! It'll help stir some ideas for the numerous stories I'm working on! (if I could give you a rating higher than ten, you'd better believe you'd have it ^_~ ) I look forward to any other works you may do in the future. |
Reviewed By: Lully On: November 24, 2002 12:08 CST
Comment/Review:
It's over? I feel sad as well....really have loved this story. It was so wonderful being able to see Goku and Vegeta interacting after getting together.
Really powerful last chapter. Made me feel what they felt....face the realities of what their lives had been with their wives...how intensely they want and need each other. Excellent fic. Yes...definitely a favorite. |
Reviewed By: Lully On: November 21, 2002 20:13 CST
Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite fics. I think I had asked about Chichi and Bulma before and where they were in relation to Goku and Vegeta. I have to admit I am not sure what is happening here....is it some sort of delayed guilt? Having a hard time with getting what he (Goku) has always wanted. I am always on the lookout for more of this story and now I will be especially anxious to find out what is going on. Love a fic where we actually get to see them together as a couple. More please! |
Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 13:00 CST
Comment/Review:
wow what a vacation
nice writing
can't wait for more |
Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 12:22 CST
Comment/Review:
that was so good.
I read the first two chapies else ware . don't ask me where I don'r recall but the fighting scenes were almost as good as the sex scenes.
great job. |
Reviewed By: Elvia On: November 06, 2002 01:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know... I've read a lot of DBZ yaoi but I must say your style of writing is exceptional and completely original! I commend you for this incredible piece of literary art! It's not all mushy stuff and its not all sex. You've got the perfect combo going, Bravo! My sincerest thanks for posting this for my, and all others who read it, enjoyment! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2002 03:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
*collapses*
OK... this one must be printed out to go in the "best DBZ yaoi fics of all time" folder.
There were times when I couldn't keep reading because my eyes were closed as I shuddered in extacy.
So there. ;P |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: November 07, 2002 09:58 CST
Comment/Review:
O.O........ok this is the first yaoi i ever read and um......wow...i'm actually speechless..O.o |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 06:53 CST
Comment/Review:
I've been keeping up with this storyline at another site.. I really like it :) it's kinda taken on a life of it's own, I can see that.. control was a good story too.. you will do more won't you :D |
