| "The Sexual Escapades of Takeru Takaishi" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: xinbra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2019 13:15 PST
Comment/Review:
I would love to see the first chapter drawn into a comic. Also, I
would love to see some hentai fanart of TK fucking Nancy and
Cherise in separately.
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Title: More
Reviewed By: Passerby_Dyl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 07:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool fic, im a big fan of ur work and would love to see alternate endings with Mimi and Cherise winning.
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 07:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
While I don't advocate incest I must say I liked this fic more and I mean way more than I thought I would excellent. And if you like Takari fics why don't you check out my stories " Run TK run and Strength's Wake [I changed the name] keep doing fics and I'll keep reading
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Title: Lot's of Sex
Reviewed By: digiyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 17:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW ... I HAVE NEVER READ ANY FANFIC LIKE THIS BEFORE ... IT WAS LIKE ALL THE CHAPTERS HAD SEX IN THEM! WOW!
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Reviewed By: Ace94d [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 00:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. Glad that Hikari and Takeru got together in the end. Faved.
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Title: ignore that previous review you are truly an artist
Reviewed By: chloe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 04:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are just the authors i mean when i say in my profile a lemon fic can be a fairy tale in itself. You ticked all the right boxes and i hope you write more fics because it was amazing.
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Title: oi interactive fiction isn't allowed
Reviewed By: the docter On: November 11, 2006 03:59 PST
Comment/Review:
you've been breaking all the mm.org rules. you are disgusting get some pills
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Title: WOOT
Reviewed By: Flame Alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 11:23 PDT
Comment/Review:
I forgive you for taking so long this ending made up for it completely. Can't wait to see what you write next.
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Reviewed By: Ray2 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 18:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. Very nice. You certainly did one hell of a job. I have to admit, though... it was also one of the stranger lemons I have read.
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Title: That was really good ^_^
Reviewed By: Cardcaptor_RLH85 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 16:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story, my only problems with it were 1: how easily Cherise gave up on TK after the contest, and 2: the fact that TK's MOTHER of all people thought that the contest was a good idea. Other than those clearly opinion based things, it was a wonderful story ^_^
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Title: WOOHOO!
Reviewed By: TheMaskedReviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 21:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Huzzah! Nay, a thousand huzzahs! *gets up and dances a jig* Yipee! I also was worried that the other two might win. I am immesurably glad that Kari came out on top (so to speak). Keep up the good work, TMR
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Title: Good Ending
Reviewed By: RedDragonKnight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 22:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well despite not doing the ending I had hoped for I still find your story interesting none the less. Maybe eventually you'll do multiple ends, eh? Pretty please with whip cream and chocolate sauce. lol
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Reviewed By: no one On: July 10, 2006 09:17 PDT
Comment/Review:
I like the idea of TK/Kari more than I like the idea of TK/Mimi or TK/OC so I'm voting for Kari. However I'd also like to see how it woulda ended if Mimi or Cherise won. Why not just make all three endings and let the viewer go to the one s/he wants to see? This way people like me who vote one way but wouldn't mind seeing it the other two ways can still see them. And there aren't a lot of TK/Mimi fics that I've seen but the few I've seen make it worth finding more of the couple.
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Title: TheMaskedReviewer
Reviewed By: TheMaskedReviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 23:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first started reading this I almost threw up. Since then, though you've fixed it up quite nicely. Also, you wrote well enough that I felt what the characters felt. Takari is my favorite couple, so you know i'm voting for Kari. Keep up the good work, TMR
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Title: vote
Reviewed By: tas m On: July 03, 2006 15:14 PDT
Comment/Review:
i vote for mimi
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