| "The Sexual Escapades of Takeru Takaishi" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Title: Hmm...
Reviewed By: E-Karasu On: July 03, 2006 06:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet fic, dude. I have to say, it would be awesome if you could just write ending chapters for each girl and just let them choose on their own that way. I mean, what if your readers miss the voting period and it turns out there were more Kari or Mimi fans or something? The multiple ending idea works pretty sweet that way, ya know? Sucks to write, though, but reader satisfaction is a rather important thing. Either way, I vote Cherise
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Reviewed By: Eezee_man [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 01:51 PDT
Comment/Review:
just for you to know,IM a Davis fan,Atleast he dosen F*** with his mother,looooooooooool
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Reviewed By: hopes flams On: July 01, 2006 01:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
love the story i vote mimi
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Title: ewwwwwwww
Reviewed By: Eezee_man [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 01:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!,HOW THE HELL?,YOURE DESGUSTING,A GUY HAVING SEX WITH HIS MOTHER????,I rather WATCHING a Takari HENTAI MOVIE THAN THIS,AND YES HE DOSEN F*** HIS MOTHER
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Title: Vote
Reviewed By: Flame Alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 00:44 PDT
Comment/Review:
Kari, simply put
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Reviewed By: CookieMunster On: June 30, 2006 08:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesome! I vote for Kari!
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Title: you forgot
Reviewed By: Eezee_man [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 00:41 PDT
Comment/Review:
well okay that was a NICE fic,but you forgot the condom while TK was having sex with his cousen,hee hee heee,and to let you know.I respect you for making it A Daikari and not Takari bye see ya
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Title: you forgot
Reviewed By: Eezee_man [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 00:38 PDT
Comment/Review:
well okay that was a NICE fic,but you forgot the condom while TK was having sex with his cousen,hee hee heee,and to let you know.I respect you for making it A Daikari and not Takari bye see ya
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Title: you forgot
Reviewed By: Eezee_man [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 00:37 PDT
Comment/Review:
well okay that was a NICE fic,but you forgot the condom while TK was having sex with his cousen,hee hee heee,and to let you know.I respect you for making it A Daikari and not Takari bye see ya
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Title: you forgot
Reviewed By: Eezee_man [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 00:37 PDT
Comment/Review:
well okay that was a NICE fic,but you forgot the condom while TK was having sex with his cousen,hee hee heee,and to let you know.I respect you for making it A Daikari and not Takari bye see ya
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Reviewed By: ZODScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 20:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It'd be great if you could do multiple endings, but if I had to choose... Kari.
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Reviewed By: Steve Jester [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 18:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
Do you have to ask Rob? Do you? You know my vote already..... GO KARI!!!
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Reviewed By: Witch32 On: June 28, 2006 14:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I vote for Kari.
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Reviewed By: pez head On: June 28, 2006 00:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best fic's on this site i vote mimi
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Title: Poll
Reviewed By: RedDragonKnight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 15:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I vote for Cherise.
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