| "Veil" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Esso1979 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2017 20:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I read this story and u went and fucked it up in
this chapter! U have been removed as an author I follow.
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Title: Change the shitty chapter of BR
Reviewed By: Dark Abyss [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2017 04:31 PDT
Comment/Review:
You sick bitch, just how sick are you? First you tell its BV fic
then you pull that BR shit. If you like raditz cock that much bitch
then write different story for him. You really broke my heart with
this fucking piece of shit chapter. Now who's son will be in bulmas
womb bitch huh? Now there no point of bulma getting together with
vegeta. She lost her memory and now fucked that sob raditz. Just
change the fucking chapter like frieza used some hologram of bulma
to show vegeta. And kill that son of a bitch radits. If you love bv
then you will change it. No BV lovers write sick shit like this.
Just change the fucking chapter for BV lovers or you won't find
many readers in future. You lying double timing bitch.
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Title: FUCK U 2$ SLUT
Reviewed By: Dark Abyss [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2017 17:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You fucking slut. First you make vegeta rape her then only to make
bulma closer to him even though it wasnt his fault then you sick
bitch made frieza rape him. It doesn't even look like VB fic. You
twisted sick fucking bitch just to make your raditz more heroic you
made vegeta being get raped and humiliated. I hope you burn in hell
you 2 dollar whore. Instead writing this shit join some whorehouse,
or fuck your family for money. I hope to god you or your children
get raped like that in your life then you will understand the
humiliation.
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Title: Quiestion?
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2011 06:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why does it say completed when you haven't even finished the battle scene? Or gotten Bulma back, or killed Frieza |
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2011 10:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutely love this series!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! poor Yamcha in ♦s!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Font Color i can't stop reading this, its so good!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I ¢¾ This I can't wait to read more of your stories!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!☺ ☻ |
Reviewed By: GogetaSSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 09:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Like the story alot, but you havent updated in ages WWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYY??????????? this isnt fair no ending
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Reviewed By: Adela 4 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 21:30 PST
Comment/Review:
love it
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 14:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just found this, read it in one day, how can you just leave this like this, you should have done more, i need more story dammit...start writing again
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Reviewed By: SaiyanPrincessKiara [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 03:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved reading this! I've been reading non stop till way past midnight! You've done an amazing job, please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next! Great job, keep it up ;)
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Reviewed By: meljoy On: August 19, 2005 13:49 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, i love your fic. I've been reading non-stop for the past few hours. I'm kinda dissapointed that i had to stop here. i mean the fight! Vegeta's gonna have a handfull to do to get his beloved mate back (beloved hmmm?) Any how please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Keriana On: May 19, 2005 02:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
..Uhm.. Did you just.. drop off the face of the earth and die? 'Cause.. updating every week? HAven't updated in a loooong time. At least give me an ending or something. I read the.. other.. thingie.. and it went over my head, methinks. Fill in the gaps? Leaving us on a cliffie. Feh.
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Reviewed By: me On: September 28, 2004 16:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
have you died or somethin?
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Reviewed By: Lady Isis On: September 28, 2004 06:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though your fanfic is waaaaayyy darker than what I usually read...its so easy to get absorbed into it, its very unpredictable...and long. Its taken me a couple days to finish reading the chapters you have. I origionally saw you on the ff.net but when you said in your profile that you were not going to update any more because of the ff.nets rule change I almost died, until I saw you had your other works on mediaminer...damn the ff.net...by taking your amazing piece of work off they lost a really awesome author and the chance for other people to read it. Iona
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Title: What? That it!
Reviewed By: empressariyana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 00:34 PDT
Comment/Review:
You gotta be kidding me! I hope your still alive and come back to update this story! It's great! We are still waiting for your return! And an end to this brilliant piece of fanfiction art!
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Reviewed By: You are my Hero. On: July 06, 2004 14:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry that I didn't review all your chapters, but I was so caught up in this. I first started reading this on FF.net, but when you moved this here, stupid me didn't bother to read your profile so I didn't know. Anyways, this is an amazing fic. Let's just say that my parents had to pry me from my computer to go eat. Please update soon! (and I hate to bug you, but BOHOE sequel? That's my fav fic in the wholeeee world)
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Reviewed By: S_U_S_A_N On: May 14, 2004 11:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shigasu T-T ist been almost a YEAR since we last heard of you...where are you? Dont you know there's lots of people who really care about you without knowing you? I didnt thought you gave up so easily, I really didnt. Learn something from Camaro, she came back for HERSELF, not because of somebody else's comments, even if you didnt support her she would had come back anyway. I know her, if you think I'm judging without precepts. I support you, still support you Shigasu, its just that I can belive you give up on the first downfall. You know, there's an example much more according to te occasion: Vegeta; did he EVER gave up?! Not even knowing Goku had surpass him, not caring Bulma told him he was crazy. YOU have to belive in YOURSELF!! That the only thing the matters, and if you dont, start doing it, because loving caring for yourself is even greater that caring for the rest. Shigusu, I'm not going to ask for an update, I'm just saying its imposible that a girl who demostrated so much emotions in a fic gave up just like that. You have the support Shigasu, now its your turn. If you need to reply write to me at sookancr2000@yahoo.com Good Luck!!
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Title: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: nikethana On: March 07, 2004 01:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Veil
Reviewed By: meeko On: February 09, 2004 20:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My God!! That was soooo good! I couldn't stop reading till i got to the last chapter!!! You have to update and soon!! I just gotta know what will happen to Bulma and Vegeta!!! Awesome fic!!! Please please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: SaTiNk06 On: January 13, 2004 13:51 PST
Comment/Review:
i love this story...i was so upset when i found out that it was deleted off ff.net....it had been so long since an update and i was like wtf? where did it go....i hope you update soon i love this story!
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Reviewed By: Yume Kuroi On: November 10, 2003 09:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffles* i love your fic! bad ff.net!! *sniffles* bad! T_T aaaaaaahhhh, please update!!!! ^^'
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Reviewed By: ANONY On: October 19, 2003 12:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why don't u eva update?!!!
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Title: update
Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 05:08 PDT
Comment/Review:
Please update this dtory. don't let one bad review ruin it.
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Reviewed By: SoulaVenger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 15:06 PDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't tell me that THIS IS ALL!!! how could u do this 2 me?!?!?!? imma go absolutely CRAZY waiting 4 u 2 update!!! & please don't say that ur not gonna update! u have 2! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Peaches [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 10:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAY COOL!
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Title: ?
Reviewed By: Goddess Living Pee-Nut Butt-er [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 14:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a good chapter. And sorry for taking so long to review! I've been bussy!
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Reviewed By: Maria S. On: October 06, 2003 11:13 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hey I thought I lost you thank god your here I would really be depressed if you got off for good! anyway its good to see u again heh heh love your fic!
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Reviewed By: cruzcontrol On: September 27, 2003 06:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fic but why dont you update?!?!?!?!?
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Reviewed By: Blue Saiyan Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 21:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I thought you had dropped off the face of the planet. I went to check to see if you had updated on FF.net and POOF! you were gone. Well, Veil at least was. So sorry, it had to come to that. This incident as well as a few others, have prompted me not to post another story on their end. I think this was/is my favorite story in regards to B/V. I seriously hope that you will continue writing this. It really is a wonderful story. |
Reviewed By: Ravage Blue On: September 08, 2003 16:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI SHIGASU! okay, that isn't your name anymore on ehre, but still, hi! i'm kind of pissed off at FF.net myself for doing that. your fic was perfectly fine! and all those reviews! i feel so sorry for you! i'm really sorry. i mena it. well, i'll ahve to keep a watch over ehre. damn you FF.net. GO TO HELL! (flips FF.net off) but i'll continues writing my stories there. but i'll focus more on FictionPress.com Story. well, talk to ya later! oh my e-mnail is firstchildofgrace@msn.com and i got messenger. i'll talk anytime wehn i'm signed on. see ya! ja ne!
Ravage Blue (still very loyal fan/reader/reviewer) |
Reviewed By: Sakiya On: September 08, 2003 16:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY I FOUND YOUR STORY!!!
It sucks what happenend but I'm glad you could put your story up somewhere...
So now I can still read it!
Hope you get over your mood... If you ever want to talk my e-mail is
sakiya13@yahoo.com
later!
Sakiya (your faithful reviewer ^-^) |
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