| "Veil" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: booka On: April 16, 2003 10:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great twists dude!! This is one kick-a@@ piece of S***! |
Reviewed By: Rye Anami On: April 15, 2003 05:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is DARN good. Very beautiful written.
*sniff* ... *sob* v-man is so darn cute when he's on earth and changin' *another sob*
Sorry, I'm ranting ^o^
Anyhoo, I'm already at a point of crazyness as bad as it can get.... please update quickly ^_^
*R~A* |
Reviewed By: Jen North [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 20:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a very interesting story. I love all of the twists in it. |
Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 12:37 PST
Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading your fic, even with the somewhat unexpected turns, please finish it .
I've been saving it on my computer and keep on reading it. |
Reviewed By: kainee On: February 11, 2003 04:52 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ooh... such an emotional rollercoaster. Please continue... although I note with some distress that you post more often on FF.net than here... the reason I don't like to read fics on FF.net is because there's too many other fics to sort through... ~__~ Please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Lilith On: January 15, 2003 10:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geez, I can understand why Vegeta's such an angry jerk sometimes. What a life. And now Goku? Good stuff. |
Reviewed By: VeggiesGirl On: January 14, 2003 15:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is great I can't wait till you post more. I was up most of the night reading it. Ive been reading it on FFnew its great there to! Keep Posting and quickly plz. I love B/V fics! Vegeta is kinda evil in this one but i like him like that he seems more *sexy* with the bad boy additude. well keep posting and i also loved your other fic Because of his Onyx Eyes! that was beautiful! and inspiring well im rambling...bye hope to read more (lol) |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: January 14, 2003 08:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is so good. You've made Vegeta such a jerk that I was conflicted about who Bulma should be with. Him or Radditz. But his personality has improved somewhat so I'm all for this union. Besides, you've killed off my boy Radditz. Though I'm really curious about the Goku/Kakarott/Bardock element? |
Reviewed By: nikeie_dawn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 11:02 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's pretty good. can't wait till the next chappie comes out. just one little question: do vegeta and bulma go back to earth? and do kakarott and chichi (if u put her in) get together? please say sumthing in the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!
-;)nikeie:P |
Reviewed By: Aurora_Glory_Alice On: December 01, 2002 00:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really glad I came across this fic! Your idea's very unique...I couldnt stop reading it. LOL! It's now 2:00 in the morning :-) |
Reviewed By: Ms2ry Angle7 On: November 28, 2002 14:00 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow, that was realy deep reading. I thought it was good how you described everything in detail leaving nothing to the imagination. Good chapter and update soon! |
Reviewed By: Natsumi Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2002 07:57 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this fic on FF.net, just wanted to say you've done a great job so far, Awwww, I know it's a b/v and I love b/v fics, but I was really depressed when Radditz died, he was so sweet ^^' oh well, it gave the character more depth I guess. Cant wait for the next chapter =]! |
Reviewed By: raska [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 19:43 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
argh..I love b/v fics, but I just can't stand the way vegeta is acting in this one. I'm finding myself rooting for radditz! *sobs* Vegeta's such a creep! no redeeming qualities whatsoever.. *sigh..* Good job on the story. Intriguing plot and I didn't get bored while reading it in one sitting. please continue:] |
Reviewed By: Chaka On: November 10, 2002 10:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, I love the chapter. Can't wait to see what you write next! |
Reviewed By: Chaka On: November 02, 2002 17:11 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome! I read this on ff.net too. I love this story! Can't wait to read the second chapter.
Chaka |
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