| "Veil" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: S_U_S_A_N On: May 14, 2004 11:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shigasu T-T ist been almost a YEAR since we last heard of you...where are you? Dont you know there's lots of people who really care about you without knowing you? I didnt thought you gave up so easily, I really didnt. Learn something from Camaro, she came back for HERSELF, not because of somebody else's comments, even if you didnt support her she would had come back anyway. I know her, if you think I'm judging without precepts. I support you, still support you Shigasu, its just that I can belive you give up on the first downfall. You know, there's an example much more according to te occasion: Vegeta; did he EVER gave up?! Not even knowing Goku had surpass him, not caring Bulma told him he was crazy. YOU have to belive in YOURSELF!! That the only thing the matters, and if you dont, start doing it, because loving caring for yourself is even greater that caring for the rest. Shigusu, I'm not going to ask for an update, I'm just saying its imposible that a girl who demostrated so much emotions in a fic gave up just like that. You have the support Shigasu, now its your turn. If you need to reply write to me at sookancr2000@yahoo.com Good Luck!!
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Title: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: nikethana On: March 07, 2004 01:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Veil
Reviewed By: meeko On: February 09, 2004 20:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My God!! That was soooo good! I couldn't stop reading till i got to the last chapter!!! You have to update and soon!! I just gotta know what will happen to Bulma and Vegeta!!! Awesome fic!!! Please please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: SaTiNk06 On: January 13, 2004 13:51 PST
Comment/Review:
i love this story...i was so upset when i found out that it was deleted off ff.net....it had been so long since an update and i was like wtf? where did it go....i hope you update soon i love this story!
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Reviewed By: Yume Kuroi On: November 10, 2003 09:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffles* i love your fic! bad ff.net!! *sniffles* bad! T_T aaaaaaahhhh, please update!!!! ^^'
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Reviewed By: ANONY On: October 19, 2003 12:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why don't u eva update?!!!
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Title: update
Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 05:08 PDT
Comment/Review:
Please update this dtory. don't let one bad review ruin it.
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Reviewed By: SoulaVenger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 15:06 PDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't tell me that THIS IS ALL!!! how could u do this 2 me?!?!?!? imma go absolutely CRAZY waiting 4 u 2 update!!! & please don't say that ur not gonna update! u have 2! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Peaches [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 10:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAY COOL!
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Title: ?
Reviewed By: Goddess Living Pee-Nut Butt-er [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 14:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a good chapter. And sorry for taking so long to review! I've been bussy!
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Reviewed By: Maria S. On: October 06, 2003 11:13 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hey I thought I lost you thank god your here I would really be depressed if you got off for good! anyway its good to see u again heh heh love your fic!
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Reviewed By: cruzcontrol On: September 27, 2003 06:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fic but why dont you update?!?!?!?!?
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Reviewed By: Blue Saiyan Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 21:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I thought you had dropped off the face of the planet. I went to check to see if you had updated on FF.net and POOF! you were gone. Well, Veil at least was. So sorry, it had to come to that. This incident as well as a few others, have prompted me not to post another story on their end. I think this was/is my favorite story in regards to B/V. I seriously hope that you will continue writing this. It really is a wonderful story. |
Reviewed By: Ravage Blue On: September 08, 2003 16:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI SHIGASU! okay, that isn't your name anymore on ehre, but still, hi! i'm kind of pissed off at FF.net myself for doing that. your fic was perfectly fine! and all those reviews! i feel so sorry for you! i'm really sorry. i mena it. well, i'll ahve to keep a watch over ehre. damn you FF.net. GO TO HELL! (flips FF.net off) but i'll continues writing my stories there. but i'll focus more on FictionPress.com Story. well, talk to ya later! oh my e-mnail is firstchildofgrace@msn.com and i got messenger. i'll talk anytime wehn i'm signed on. see ya! ja ne!
Ravage Blue (still very loyal fan/reader/reviewer) |
Reviewed By: Sakiya On: September 08, 2003 16:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY I FOUND YOUR STORY!!!
It sucks what happenend but I'm glad you could put your story up somewhere...
So now I can still read it!
Hope you get over your mood... If you ever want to talk my e-mail is
sakiya13@yahoo.com
later!
Sakiya (your faithful reviewer ^-^) |
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