"Man! I feel like a woman!" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
Reviewed By: Kagome_the_Yorkie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 15:57 CDT Comment/Review: Oooh my head...y'know, I'm just having trouble imagining Nakago as a scrawny...skimpy...tiny little...AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEEHEEHEEHEE...n-nev er mind..........ha-haha....
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Title: Last Review Reviewed By: Sweet Nuriko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 15:49 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *You read the heading of the daily newspaper. It reads: "Girl from Texas dies from laughter in her computer room after reading a story online"* *Is resurected* Ack!! Oh my gosh!!! I love you!! (not in that way) I loved the way Suzaku and Seriyuu were rambling like children, and how Nuriko acted...(Is a major Nuriko lover) Hmm...I'm going to put something like that in a story I'm writing...my story with my own people and everything...I'm so glad you wrote this, it's one of the best I've read, even if it's not a romance/hentai...gosh I've reviewed you a lot... >.< well you really should write more fanfictions....if you like Inuyasha, you could do an Inuyasha one similar to this one, and you should do more fanfic in general (Is repeating herself) Well anyways...have a good life ^^; (ran out of things to say)
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Title: 4th chapter review Reviewed By: Sweet Nuriko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 14:56 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: You've improved... even though you wrote this a long time ago... *chokes on her jolly rancher due to laughing too much* You need to write more than nine chapters, if that's not where the fanfic ends, because I don't know anything... *Sighs out of her own stupidity-ness*
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Title: 1st chapter review Reviewed By: Sweet Nuriko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 14:25 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Hmm...this one had me cracking up all over the place!!! But, you might want to hire an editer because some words are miss spelled like sometimes you spelled Seishi:Senchi, and Kuto:Kotu...but most of the words are good!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: xshiny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 10:29 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: lol great fic! i really enjoyed the part when tama thought he was dying hahah! gj and keep up the great work ^.^ |
Reviewed By: yume_no_kanari [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2002 23:26 CST Comment/Review: AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! This was great! I can't wait to see more! Can I PLEEZE put this on my website? Pretty PWEEZE?
(If I do I'd edit it for grammar if I got permission...sorry my mom's an english teacher...) |
Reviewed By: kawaiigrl On: December 18, 2002 14:40 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: THIS STORY IS SO FRICKIN' HILLARIOUS!!! *stops laghing hystaricaly* You most deffenitly need to write more. I liked the part when Tamahome thought he was dieing. IT WAS SO FUNNY!!! It's a shame that few of the shenshi know so little about girls... Anyhoo, keep on writening this funny story! ^.~ |
Reviewed By: Kuraiyami [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2002 17:32 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: lol that all I need to say about this story ^_^. It the best Akugi Yugi I've read in a long time. |
Reviewed By: trinity_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 21:53 CST Comment/Review: teehee i love it!!! More more! |
Reviewed By: trinity_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 21:37 CST Comment/Review: No Nakago no Nagi! Nagi cute little telekinetic guy in WK anywho funny so far now i keep reading (Read my FY fanfic when i write more...it's a crossover w/Ranma half...i haven't written much yet tho.) |
Reviewed By: Luna On: December 08, 2002 21:18 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This was the most funnyest fan fic that I've read since Fishigi Akugi lol. I love it!!! |
Reviewed By: lady_sodina [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 17:55 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: MY GOD THIS IS FREAKIN HILARIOUS!!!! i REALLY loved it when Tamahome thought he was dying... that was great!! |
Reviewed By: Suzaku_123 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 00:27 CST Comment/Review: Too bad men doesn't know what the bleeding meant.Anyway...More chapters please! |
Reviewed By: kitsunechibi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2002 22:58 CST Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: The storyline is really funny and amusing, but... You have a lot of spelling errors. The Japanese word for warrior is spelled "senshi" not seshi or sechi. ^^; You also misspelled "clothes". Remember, spell check is your best friend. (except when it comes to Japanese words). The OOC-ness is kind of okay because its humor, but I think you shouldnt do it too much, or the characters just arent the same. And bras didnt exsist in ancient China, so therefore the only one to have them would have been Miaka and Yui. You have quite a few other things that dont belong in ancient China too, like kimonos. Those are Japanese; not Chinese. But they did have heavy silk outfits for the women. (you see Nuriko wearing these in the beginning of the series, as well as some of the servant girls.) If youre going to talk about clothes in a story like this, you should probably do a little reaserch beforehand. I really like how small you made Nakago though. VERY amusing. :D I think you should add a bit more description too. It would probably make it more amusing. In the beginning you also switched 'his' and 'her' a lot, so it got a little confusing at times. Did you proofread or have someone beta read it? Those are always helpful. I really enjoyed the "Im dying!!" Bit from Tamahome. XD Overall a nice fic. |
Reviewed By: suzaku priestess On: November 02, 2002 19:05 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *goes into histerics*AHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!TAMAHOME THOUGHT HE WAS DYING...AND SO DID TASUKI AND HOTOHORI!!!*falls over laughing and passes out* pretty pink bunnies... |
Reviewed By: Jameta [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 13:31 CST Comment/Review: Oh, this is too precious *snickers* I especially enjoyed it because I was in a bad mood before I started reading, and now I feel much better. Thanks! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Suzaku_123 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2002 06:06 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Its Hilarious!Especially the "There".LOL! |