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| "White Stones in the Moonlight" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: Phoenix88 On: February 06, 2009 10:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic! it's awesome. the twists and turns, the surprises! it's all so refreshing! you have great grammar and spelling, and a great plot.
| Reviewed By: Shinsetsu-chan (unlogged...) On: February 10, 2007 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*speachless..almost* All during this fic till almost the end, I had SO much I wanted to say. But after reading the very end and even forcing myself to read the author notes, I'm semi satisfied. (It was dying, holding off until I finished.) A friend refered this fic saying Mits was depicted well. Which he is. I was ECSTATIC. He's not an unemotional block of wood! YES! Came for Mitsu, but stayed and fell in love with the story. The only thing in this bugging me was the relationship between Chiri and Taiistukun. I just don't think Chiri would be quick to be suspicious of her after 3 years training under her. And I'm sure she has more compassion than how she reacted and how you portrayed her as being the ignorant immortal which doesn't understand and care much for the human emotions and stability. And a few others that aren't coming to mind right now.. Those first few chapters were hard to read. I had to stop every 4 paragraphs or so and get my anxiety settled ..on many occasions I had to remind myself this was a fic, too. You surprised me, before now I don't think I've verbally argued with a fic! XD Loudly, I might add. I love everything about this fic now. I nearly caught every little mentionable in those author notes, including the dead leaves notion. Because of this one fic I think I myself have a more mature outlook, if just in how I view my writing. Which I can't thank you enough, and probably future readers of this ficcer... it will probably save their sanity. XD And another thing.. I've never given a thought to the Hoto/Nuri pairing, but I loved how you did them. And not in a.. 'Oh, they love eachother, so they're kinda gay.' but in a spiritual kind of relationship. :3 Backing up the thought about how Nuri would love him even if they were in different bodies. The end of this made me very sad.. knowing how they're all going to continue and never know or go through with their previous feelings or form that strong of a bond with eachother. My guild of FY friends, some speak very highly of you as an authoress and I can see why. In all my time reading fics, you're only the second one who I found this amazing in her writing skills. I give you a lifetime supply of kudos. 8D
| Reviewed By: Zab Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 17:32 CST
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It had been a while since I'd read this, and since I'd recently decided to rewatch my Fushigi Yuugi episodes, I had the urge to read this again. I can't believe I didn't leave a review the first time I read it. (Smacks her own hand) Bad reader, no cookie! Anyway, you are an amazing writer. The true test of talent is in making the reader feel. This fic made me cry, laugh, grin like an idiot, and sob my heart out. The ending is a masterpiece. I could feel the pain and confusion of the characters, longing to have back what they couldn't even remembering having and utterly confused about why those feelings were there. Thank you for not giving it a "happy" ending. Not only would it have made it firmly an AU, it would have stolen the emotional impact of the story. I've been writing things since I was nine (I'm now 24). I hope that some day, I will have half the talent you do.
| Title: Still Love it After 3 Years
Reviewed By: ItsTheDee [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally got smart and hopped onto Mediaminer, so I figured one of the first things I ought to do is review this gem of a fic. I've said it before, but I'll gladly scream it from the rooftops again: you, Roku-senpai, are one *hell* of a writer, and any time I'm in the need of a good fanfic fix I always know exactly where to go. My only complaint is that I don't have enough free time to read the rest of "Hidden Paths" on ff.net, but I fully intend to digest as much of that story as humanly possibly over Christmas break. Ah... beautiful Christmas break. Anyway, "White Stones." For anyone who reads reviews before reading fanfics, all I have to say is: why are you wasting your time with my review? For God's sake, go read the fanfic! You'll laugh, cringe, boo, cheer, and probably shed a few tears before all is said and done. It's been just about 3 years since I've read "White Stones," but hot damn, it's still one of my favorite fanfics out there. The only one that even comes close to beating it, in fact, is "Bridge of the Abyss" (also available on Mediaminer.org from Roku Kyu *cheesy grin and thumbs up*)! The only question left is: when are you going to start spitting books onto the *real* market? Let me know when your first novel comes out, because I will *definitely* be snatching that baby up as soon as it hits the shelves. ^_^ Well, I've just about used up my character limit (which was actually my goal ^.~), so I'd better end this about now. (And its exactly 1500 chars!)
| Title: Incredible
Reviewed By: Yami396 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfiction deserves nothing less than tens all around. You kept the characters as they were supposed to be, your descriptions were amazing, and you lack nothing in talent. Your ending had me sobbing all day after I read it, and I laughed for hours after Hotohori's little speech mishap. Really, all I can say is that this story is excellent and it should win some award 'cause you derserve it! Could you e-mail me the original one-shot that inspired this fanfiction? I'd like to read it. My e-mail address is: yami396@yahoo.com. Thanks.
| Reviewed By: Ayanni [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely written. I am rather picky about fics, but I really liked this one. The idea was great, the story telling was great, and the grammar and such was perfect, making this an all around wonderful story. I like your views on the relationships between everyone, and I do have to agree that the relationship that you portrayed between Tasuki and Miaka was more mature than the one between Miaka and Tamahome. Miaka and Tama seem more obsessed with each other than in love, which isn't entirely healthy. It would have been interesting for Tama, Tasuki, and Miaka to end up a threesome, but the way you did it was very good. I considered maybe writing my own version where that happened, but decided against it. It would most likely just end up being your story written in my words, with a plot twist. It doesn't seem right to do that(though I would of course have asked permission and given you credit. Plagiarism is EVIL). Anyway, very good story. Nuriko and Tasuki are my favorite characters (in that order) and you portrayed them very well. I read the entire thing in one night and enjoyed it greatly. Thank you for making my night a good one.
| Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 08:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! Just Damn! I really loved this story. It's been a very long time since I have read a really good Fushigi Yuugi fanfic. You even had me, a die hard Tamahome/Miaka fan, rooting for Tasuki and Miaka. I appreciated how you tried to keep the spirit of the characters and Yuu Watase's story infused within your own. I am going to recommend this on one of the "Good Fanfiction" Mailing lists as a must read fic. It is that good. Thank you.
| Title: Helloness
Reviewed By: Hono On: August 15, 2004 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I sent your fic to so maney people, that I lost count. Needless to say White Sones in the Moon Light, is the best and most touching fic I have ever read. I love how realistic all the charicters are and how it can make cry at the begining, laugh through out the middle, and then get all teary eyed again at the end. Keep writing!!!
| Reviewed By: pcan On: June 13, 2004 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My friend sent this fic to me a while ago, and i just want to tell you how completely AWSOME this is. Though, is there going to be a sequal? and is Nurkio (i spelled that wrong) going to die like he does in the manga? Please write more!! -p www.livejournal.com/users/pcan
| Reviewed By: jynnantonnix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OH MY GOD I couldn't stop laughing after chapter 8! ^_^
| Title: pure poetry
Reviewed By: Sayuri_1978 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 13:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read many many fan fctions, and this one touched me far more then any other. The story and character development were beyond wonderful. I truely hope that you someday write a sequel. Hpefullt in that next life taski spoke of where they can all be that close and be a true and whole family again
| Reviewed By: yasai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 10:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Je-sus Christ ... I am on the third chapter only so far ... and even though I'm not even half-way through, I can feel this wrenching my mind. I personally love Tasuki more than anyone in the FY series and I myself constantly bash Miaka and Tamahome. This fic sends shivers up my spine, beseeches me not to ead anymore, yet my eyes will not let me and I want to read more and more ... This renders me senseless and sends me to hell ... again, Je-sus Christ ... For you have woven a story so vivid and despairing, I am whole-heartedly addicted. Gods ... I will continue to read! Please mind you have a talent ... please mind this of all things. I envy this ... Best Wishes to you, yasai
| Title: O_O
Reviewed By: SapphireStar (not logged in) On: December 15, 2003 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woah O___O not an ending i expected...awesome! ^_^
| Title: *sniffle*
Reviewed By: Yami Crystalline ( to lazy to log in ) On: December 15, 2003 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh myy...that was so wonderful!!! *sniffle* i had tears in my eyes with the Miaka / Tasuki goodbye scene...it was so sad... yes ^_^ sequel!! whoot!can't wait to see it. A most awesome job on finishing up the story - most unexpected end twist.
| Reviewed By: Lina Inverse [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I absolutely love this fic. The suspense built up quickly, instantly keeping my attention. The style of writing is brilliant and the grammar is flawless.
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