| "Like Father Like Son" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 15:55 CDT
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This was deep. I was almost in tears. Applauses on the writing. Great job
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Reviewed By: richonyx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome. So dark. It made me want to cry. Very, very, very well done!
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Title: Like father Like son
Reviewed By: Frederikke On: July 30, 2004 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I'm a mojor fan of yaoi stories, and your story is ONE OF THE BEST YAOI STORIES I'VE EVER READ!!!!!!!! I love the hole idea aboute the story and I would love if you could write more yaoi stories with more darker tems simillar to 'Like father Like son'...(he he I'm such a pervert) SO PLEASE WRITE MORE STORIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: thank you thank you!
Reviewed By: LN On: January 28, 2004 16:08 CST
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i love how you show vegeta's ability to understand through his own experience. and it's intersting, how you make the mother/son abuse more painful than teh 17/sage abuse. we always assume penitration would hurt, and that being with a woman would be "not as bad." brilliant way to show how abuse hurts the psyche, not just the body. the incest-used-as-therapy is handled with such suprising sensuousness and- can i say this about a fahter screwing his own son?- love. wow. thankyou for the brave and thought provoking fic!
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Reviewed By: CHELLE On: November 11, 2002 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS A TOUCHING FANFIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura The King [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2002 15:07 CST
Comment/Review:
it was pretty wierd reading some of it, but it is ok the second time reading it. I'm finally off of Sage. He was an obsessed favorite character for a while, but now im back to Vega Obscura, Sai Sichi, My characters **hugs plushie of Mike and Pat**, and Raven. lol still good job,even tho i dont like some of the things u used in this story
**shakes head** you kno what i mean lol |
Reviewed By: Michelle On: November 04, 2002 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Please please write another! I loved this fanfic! It was really oringal and really fun to read. I was ploting the whole was only to be thrown off! Please, for the sake of my sanity, write another! |
Reviewed By: eyes_on_the_birdie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this fic, are you going to write more on it or do a sequel or anything? if you are can you let me know? crazyraditzlover@yahoo.com thanx! |
Reviewed By: Dana On: November 04, 2002 11:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Very intersting... but please add alittle to the epl--thingy ( I can't spell) and tell if it boy or girl. PLEASE and thank you and vey nice |
Reviewed By: zingzinglee [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 07:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It amazes me how you can create such emotion with your words. You have writing style is superb, and you boldly faced a number of social taboos without overdramatizing or understating them. |
Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 00:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You wrote this so well. You went all out on the taboos too.
Thats ok, it was so sweet and I want that Vegeta(senior) you wrote all for myself.
Great job. |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura the King (NLI) On: November 03, 2002 20:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Yes a brilliant writer with a character that is adictive. I, however, love MY characters more!
**hugs Mike (my character) and every other character I have ** |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2002 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
personally you are a briliant writer and this is a good writin story, I have read some of your other and they are great to. |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura the King (NLI) On: November 03, 2002 16:51 CST
Comment/Review:
I didnt like it that much, like i said b4, but still it is kinda interesting. |
Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2002 09:01 CST
Comment/Review:
I don't know what to say. Yaoi is one thing but.. *shakes head*
That was... different, to say the lest. It was superbly written, there's no doubt about that ;) But as for the story itself.. well, yeah, different lol. |
