"The OFF series" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Rev'd On: November 22, 2002 20:41 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: This is an entertaining read, despite some grammar and spelling errors, particularly in capitalization. Asuka is very OOC, however. Also, Godzilla's introduction is contrived, as there is no adequate explanation for Kaoru's appearing in Asuka's dreams, nor is his power to bring a fictional character to life, much less his motivation in doing so.
In all, an entertaining but not very interesting story. | Reviewed By: Oberon Coto On: November 20, 2002 07:28 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10 Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review: This story, on the technical merits is good. Spelling and Grammer are spot on and structure seems to be well handled.
But The overall originality of the fic is low. Common crossover menality, pitting everyone against the most mundane of antagonists. Also the stories themselves are mediocure, and feel more as if the are dictated rather then lived. The pull is just not there. I tried reading the entire fic, and couldn't complete it because of boredom. | Reviewed By: Popgun On: November 14, 2002 09:32 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: Even if you never contribute another sentence, Mr Covello, you'll still be one of the most skilful writers ever to while away time with Evangelion fanfiction. I've never been readier to lament the passing of an ACC (even if I thought I could detect the deathmark on her forehead from the moment she appeared) nor found the integration of other external material easier to accept. Simply put, authoritative and unfailingly intelligent. | Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 12:48 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: You may have seen my review on FFN but let me say that I enjoyed the differing areas you delved into during this series. I do not know of what conflict you had with the Eva community in general but other than the Ako part it was a good read.
I think you should continue it. Maybe have it here only on mediaminer!
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