| "Spin the Bottle" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
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Reviewed By: Im a person On: October 16, 2004 17:33 CDT
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That was hilariouse I coulden't stop laughing I actually had tears in my eyes!!! Good job
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Reviewed By: Lady Macbeth [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 11:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an interesting idea for a cute viginette. :) I would love to see this fleshed out with more description and depth of action - as a largely-dialog fic, it gets dialog heavy and tends to drag on after a bit. I think that spicing it up with a bit more depth of writing would really liven it up. Keep up the good effort! :)
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Reviewed By: marcy On: June 05, 2004 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great great great great great story it was hilarious it had everything i need in a story comedy,romance, and alot of other things keep goin and u can make it all the way 2 the top so keep wrighting and i llllllllllooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeee love love love love love ur story.
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Reviewed By: Nate Grey [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 07:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Been on my favorites for a while, but I just forgot to review it. Really funny, grat job. |
Reviewed By: not applicable On: July 18, 2003 02:15 CDT
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That fic was so HILARIOUS! Oh, I loved it so much! I admit, truth and dare fics are one of my favourites! |
Reviewed By: ~*§ugar*Plum*~ On: September 09, 2001 17:32 CDT
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Aww... the ending was kawaii!! The rest was sooooooooooooooooooooo hillarious! I couldn't stop laughing!!!!! Good job!! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Aki-chan On: September 18, 2001 21:56 CDT
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I loved this! Especially the dares! Gave me some great party ideas *evil Eriol grin* ^_^ Itterasshai! |
Reviewed By: NeoJupiter On: October 26, 2001 19:21 CDT
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Hi! I love your story! What about the whole syaoran not being a virgin and he lost it with Eriol(but not with him)? Could you e-mail me at NeoJupiter88@aol.com and explain it to me? i really want to know! |
