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| "Bathroom Stalls" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Lyn On: November 22, 2002 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love it. Absolutely love it. Though I think it leans more to the Takesuke side than Daikeru. Still, it's extremely yummy. Two extremely cute guys making out in a highschool bathroom...what more could you need? ^^;;
The characterization was good. You made their personalities distinct, and I like the way you made Takeru more...aggressive. O.o **sighs** Takeru still wants Hikari, though...what a shame. ^_^
I admit, it did end a bit abruptly. 'Tis still wonderful, though. Muchas gracias for writing it.
-Lyn | Reviewed By: Kleptomaniac Can Opener [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 00:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked it! I really, really liked it!
Damn, that make out session was yummy. The poor Freshman, though. *snickers* Oh well, he'll get over it.
*goes to read more of your fics*
=^_^=
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