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| "He Doesn't Swing That Way" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: belladonna fait [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 00:50 CST
Comment/Review:
*shoots 'i love yugi and davis'*
Ahem..
Now thats over with the reveiw..
i like it..
i love how he doesnt knock.. and how it doesnt end up like
"hi ken"
"Dai, i love you fuck me!"
"Oh ken chan i never thought you loved me. i love you too. fuck me!"
* outrageous sex scene that is more vulgar than worth reading *
Thankyou cadelasan, for the good story and for not ending it like the above.
(you rock on girl)
~bella | Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 08:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, well, hi.......CONTINUE IT DAMMIT!!! WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!!! DAVIS HAS 2 KNOW KENS FEELINGS!!! Sorry, lost my temper but will u plz write another chapter | Reviewed By: Lyn On: November 22, 2002 14:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yes, well, hi. I was hesitant to read this one at first, but I like it, even though it happens to be a Kensuke. I don't think Ken is that bad, it's just the pairing. x_x
I like how you made it so that Ken didn't knock. All other fics that I've read, whatever the pairing, has the two ending up happily ever after. Yours is original and realistic. Just the way I like it. ^_^
I like your humorous bits, like the part about Miyako being a whore, and the crack about Takeru's ass. ^^;; Half because they're funny, half because it sort of releases the tension in the certain passages, and half because I've a peverted idiot. -_-;;
So yeah. All in all, this was good. Of course, it's still a Daikeru world. ^_^
-Lyn |
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