| "Desire" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: NorthrenBanshee [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 11:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow,really great fic!!Only one thing: It´s "schön" not "schöen",I´m from Austria...If I would know more english verbs,I would say you how much I like your fic^^
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Reviewed By: WilliDrairAngel On: August 22, 2003 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOO! Great fic! It was really sweet, with a wonderfully sad ending. A sequal would be nice, but I think ending it here wouldn't be so bad. n_n
Schu is now my new obsession! YAY!!! n_n |
Reviewed By: gale On: July 04, 2003 08:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really love this and cant wait for more but have you decided if Yoji is blonde or brunette because he changed in the fic and I dont think he had time to dye his hair I personally like him with dark hair best but Im not fussy |
Reviewed By: winged kitten On: July 03, 2003 23:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
sequel? pretty pretty please? |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 08:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know how many times I've come back to read this one, but I haven't commented on it before. I just wanted to say that it's beautiful and I really hope that you will make a sequel to it. It's so full of sorrow and it's also so sweet... Thank you for such a wonderful rereadable story! |
Reviewed By: Chibi-chan On: April 10, 2003 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
T_T...that was such a sad ending...but in a way -- it HAD to end that way...*frown* Oh well...Sequel maybe, though? |
Reviewed By: Pandora.81 On: November 18, 2002 07:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Ohhh, that fiction is so great and hot and sweet!
Waahhhhhh!!! Please continue the story. Phhuuulleeeezzzzze!!!!!!! *begs with puppy eyes* |
Reviewed By: Codename: Mastermind [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 00:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Aww, sankies for the lovely reviews! Well... since you all seemed to like it so much... I GUESS I could write a sequel. *snicker* I'll start soon, hopefully I'll have the first part up this weekend. XD~~~ Ja matta. |
Reviewed By: Cayenne On: November 16, 2002 00:16 CST
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You can't just stop there!! Write a sequel, this fic deserves one. I like how you didn't go straight off into the lemon, you have a good scene leading up to it. A good plot and way to go at keeping the characters in character. The ending it lovely and is the perfect set up for a good sequel or two. Keep up the good work! Ja ne!! |
Reviewed By: Briar Rose On: November 14, 2002 08:10 CST
Comment/Review:
That was sweet. I especially liked the banter between Yohji and Schu---lines like, "I'll carry you, but only because you're hot." And Crawford's expression: Schuldich-I-swear-if-you-are-in-here-I-am-going-to-kick-your-ass. It's certainly worthy of a sequel. |
Reviewed By: Adaon On: November 13, 2002 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWW please write more! Don't leave them like this!!!! |
Reviewed By: Miss J On: November 05, 2002 04:01 CST
Comment/Review:
*cries*
why so sad ending??????
make SEQUEL!!!
it's a SWEEET SxY story!!!
i LUUUV it laa~~ |
Reviewed By: m_chan ^__^ On: November 04, 2002 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More...PWEASE!?
*holds out virtual pocky* bribe? |
Reviewed By: minhkie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 06:11 CST
Comment/Review:
waah! i loved it! please write more ^^;; |
Reviewed By: LittleIsa On: November 07, 2002 07:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Awwwwww so sad!!! *sniffles* Poor Schu and Yohji! Please write more...you can't leave them like that!!! *whimpers*
Good story though!! ^_________^ |
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