| "Libera me" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: sheiba90 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 10:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sooo sad! I felt like crying!
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 04:58 CST
Comment/Review:
ya know... it's ok to put the lemon in the story....
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Reviewed By: razorbld On: February 16, 2003 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please put them back together! They need to be together! Even though fluffy is a couple of centuries old and Rin's just 16, Put 'em back!
Rin was put in the show to tame Sessoumaru and mate him when she gets older, as so they have alot of kids and Fluffy gets a good life, and they find a way to make her imortal.
I know that you did this fic a very long time ago, but I just found It. Please think hard about the people who have read but for some reason didn't, or couldn't review. The end truely hurts. It needs to have some alterations done on it; because I, demon kat, sailor uranus and countless others are deeply saddened by this outcome. You killed Rin's heart. Especially if you add the lemon chapter in there. All of the stuff that they did together is not something that is dismissable. She has known Hatsui for two days. She will never truly be happy knowing that she lost her Sessoumaru. she will become a tragic character like Kikyo. True, this is mearly a story about the the greatest show ever and is not real life, a reader wonders about what will happen now... Here, we already know. You have a incredible talent. I'm serious, you really, REALLY need to make another chapter. All that It needs to be is one page. Perhaps a short seperate alternate ending fic. I have a vivid imagination and I can imagine senarios to a point that would blow your mind... but only the author can truely make the outcome what it needs to be. Please. make it live.
A wise man once said "Great works are never complete, only abandoned." Do not be someone who abandons what in this reviewer's eyes is the authors best work to date. All that I ask is that you take this to heart. |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: February 16, 2003 20:11 CST
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fluffy stay with Rin! Hatsui blows!
(Throws an entire damn Timberland factory at you) |
Reviewed By: chi_dono [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAA! thats so sad, making sesshomaru-sama cry :( o well, i love it! this is an awesome story! (one of my favorites in fact!) write more stores like this!!! |
Reviewed By: chi_dono [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAA! thats so sad, making sesshomaru-sama cry :( o well, i love it! this is an awesome story! (one of my favorites in fact!) write more stores like this!!! |
Reviewed By: Tanidra On: November 17, 2002 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Taht is a very goood story. |
Reviewed By: Tanidra On: November 17, 2002 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Taht is a very goood story. |
Reviewed By: sailor uranus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 15:40 CST
Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS FICCY I DONT KNOW WHAT ELSE TO SAY but i must say sesshoumaru must be with rin but here is the truth sesshoumaru belongs to me j/k |
Reviewed By: sailor uranus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 15:26 CST
Comment/Review:
oh my god i dont know what to say other then i love it ! i just read the 1 chappie and i love this fic i just love it i cant belive that no other people reviewd this amazing fic i just love it! |
Reviewed By: demon kat On: November 04, 2002 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
grrrrrrrrrrrrr.........what the hell! *chucks boot after author* what the hell!! she leaves him? u better put them back together! grrrrrrrrr.....how could u...what the hell!! i know, i'm repeating myself..i know...but i like! write more! ~.^ |
