| "Hellsing's Knight Ranma" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Xero Reflux Strike [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 11:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally awesome! Update soon kay?
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Reviewed By: Gina- san On: June 30, 2003 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to relearn how to spell and how to use proper punctuation. For example, you wrote the word (new) instead of knew also you wrote (cold) instead of could. All in all you need to have someone read over you work before you put it on open display. Unlike you they can see it from an objective point of view and see grammar mistakes. But other than that I commend you on your creativity and originality. I would also like to thank you for introducing me to Hellsing. |
Reviewed By: Gina- san On: June 30, 2003 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to relearn how to spell and how to use proper punctuation. For example, you wrote the word instead of knew also you wrote instead of could. All in all you need to have someone read over you work before you put it on open display. Unlike you they can see it from an objective point of view and see grammar mistakes. But other than that I commend you on your creativity and originality. I would also like to thank you for introducing me to Hellsing. |
Reviewed By: Vegiku On: March 25, 2003 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this fic, i've never seen one like it. please hurry and write the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: NesTea On: February 27, 2003 14:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love the fic. we need more Ranma & Hellsing Fusions:) |
Reviewed By: Guardian Mike [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 13:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! It's one of my favorites!
Please add another chapter soon, i want to read more! |
Reviewed By: lunachan579 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 18:16 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm still waiting for the next chapter.... |
Reviewed By: lunachan579 On: December 21, 2002 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE NICE!! I like good job! you did a GREAT job on this story I hope you write more cause if you don't I'm gonna go INSAINE!!!!!!! so please write more! I like the way you put Integral in alot of it the other storys on fanfiction.net don't put her in there as much!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!! thanx! |
Reviewed By: kawaiiBlackAngel On: November 11, 2002 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First thing I want to say is that this is a great story. I give this story a 10 in the enjoyment factor because the story is very funny and even know there are some sad parts it is blanced out by this. I Also gave it a 9 in the originality/creativity because I have never seen a story with Ranma quite like this before, and I think that it is very original.**Maybe its just me?** I hope this story keeps going. |
