| "Freak Show" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 14:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, this is actually pretty good. May I even say great. When will you update though? I'd like to see more.
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Reviewed By: Luna On: March 03, 2003 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY,I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!! I WANT TO KNOW IF THEY GET OUT OK!!! 'quite your complainging,runt, what do you want, a miracle?' *Pounds Vegeta with a rubber hammer* Baka no ouji.
'WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT FOR?' BECAUSE YOUR A MAJOR PAIN IN THE BUTT!!! *Vegeta cowers from Luna.*
'uh...um...uh....sorry' |
Reviewed By: Luna On: February 17, 2003 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THEY CAN'T DO THIS TO GOKU!!!! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS. VEGETA BETTER HELP THEM! 'oh yeah, what do you want me to do,brat?' *Smacks Vegeta with a frying pan* Ouji no baka. |
Reviewed By: Chuquita [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 17:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow! Creative story. Poor Go-chan and Chi-Chi. The bad guy thinks Goku's the last saiyajin; he doesn't know about Veggie! :) Veggie can save 'um! I hope they get their real forms back! |
