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| "The Dance" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Hello!
Reviewed By: Katrina and Sam On: April 23, 2005 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! My nmae's Katrina! Sam: No way! She would have never thought of THAT! I mean, your name is only at the top of your review-thingy. Me: ^_^; Uh, this is my little sister, Sam. She's kind of miffed about how you were about to say that thing about Trunks. In fact...*shows Sam chained to a chair while trying to escape* she wants to pumble you for even writing that. Sam: How dare you write that about...wait. *glares at Katrina.* We are twins. I'm four minutes older than you, so what the flip is up with YOU calling ME little!?* grabs out Eletra-like daggars ( Sam saw that movie, and she practicly fell in love with the daggars. Sam: The daggars and outfit is sooooo cool! Did you see the movie?), breaks free of the chair, luges at Katrina, and.......Screen shows a tiny girl. Hi! I'm Mika, their younger sister. Sorry about the long review. Katrina writes a mile a minute. Well, good night! It's, what, like !2:07. Bye! *backround* Sam: Die, Katrina, you evil scum!
| Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, what's with the cliff hanger!? I hate it when people do this to me (even if it is pretty much the only way to get people to check for updates.) Hurry up with the next chapter, I luv this story! |
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