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| "I Thee Wed" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: rennysusanto [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2013 12:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!! Hope youcancontinue your amazing work... | Reviewed By: Shilling On: June 04, 2003 17:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story as you can tell and I've followed it through FanFiction but that website is sometimes slow and problematic and I was hoping that when you have the time, you could update at this site! Cuz I really love your story! | Reviewed By: killarri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 19:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is awesome! I love it! Please update soon. I was looking for it on ff.net and it wasn't there, I just wanted to let you know that in case you didn't.
Anyway, as a fellow Yamcha basher, I'm so happy that you killed him off. Oh that part about him losing it and cumming on the sheets in chapter one was hilarious.
Keep writing please! | Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 19:35 EST
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OK, it apparently didn't take my review...or I'm just seeing things o_0 Although I'd go with the latter.
You sprained your fingers bowling? Ouch....I pulled a muscle in my leg dancing then had to go bowling. Here's a hint, Never do that!
YeY! Yamcha's Dead!! *Runs around screaming 'Yamcha's Dead'*
Sorry ya'll. Hyper! Too much sugar today.....
Well please continue, lots 'o' Love!
~ Crazy One | Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 19:31 EST
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Oooh creepy...YeY!Yamcha's dead! OK, you really deserve more reviews.I for one, absolutely love this story and want you to continue. | Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 01:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rn: Oooo, I LOVE gym hockey. I kick da arse!! *LOL* Aw, you no like? I'm sorry. Heh, I suck at bowling. I hit the ball on my leg and jammed my finger(or was it my thumb?) the 1st time I played, I so I understand your frustration. >.His white shirt wrinkled and open at the throat, O.O *drools*
Alright, this chapter has a description of this new (and alien to me) Saiyan Monk culture. That was VERY helpful. And his master's candles sound lovely (hm, I wonder what Vegeta's candle would be if he'd ever make it?) Dark blue, almost midnight colored, with a wild exotic scent. One he would, could, never forget.
‘ As exotic as Bulma’s ’
*snickers* Aw, poor Veggie. He needs to light up some candles, take a nice hot bath, and have a nice relaxing evening ... with our fav heroine there to keep him occupied! ^_~
I agree with Bulma ... there's NO reason she should trust that tea. The only reason she's doing this is for Vegeta (he he). Hm, I'm curious about what else is in that book ... maybe some ways to heighten the "experience" for Saiyans. *blinks* Damn, I'm such a hentai!! ^_~ Nevermind nevermind, I'm moving on.
*blinks* She's walking around the estate in her nightgown??? Now I'M worried. I mean, if I already had the "spidey sense" tingling, then I wouldn't go out. Well, I MIGHT, but NOT for my life in a nightgown. *gulp* I DO hope Yamcha isn't prowling about. *shrugs* Who knows ... maybe Vegeta will take a break from his meditation, decide to join the festivities, go for a walk himself, and ... have a little "interlude" with Bulma. *smirks*
!!! Is someone following her?? And they have the keys?? PHEW!! Thank YOU dragon-strengthen-women's-intuition-tea!!! At least she knew to get out of there.
Grrrrr, I KNEW it was that scumbag Yamcha!! And there's someone ELSE there too??? Sheesh, it's a whole other party. "By Jove! What are you doing here?" Hmmm, he knows who it is, obviously. O.O He he's ... alright, someone finally took that bastard out!
After what seemed like forever Bulma’s door was closed, there was no sound of footsteps. No footsteps? No retreat. No use of the main stairway--a secret passage or window entry? Whatever you do, Bulma, DON'T go up there!! Stepping out of the unused room she made her way back to her bedchamber. NOOoooo!!! Don't GO!!! In the eerie moonlight the blood that stained his white shirt and the floor around him looked black. This time the bastard was dead; there would be no need to toss him down the stairs now.
O.O *faint laughter is heard ... that grows into a torrent* Oh yeah! *singing* Ding dong the wicked bastard's dead!!!! *does her psycho "happy" dance* I LOVE the suspense in that past part, the description, and ... the last line. THAT deserves a 10! Muahahahahahah!!! I can't WAIT for more. ^_~ | Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2002 01:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yey! Wonderful! I love it, continue, or else. ^_~ J/K I'm tired, that's just what happens. Veggie-chan, “If you ever, by chance find yourself in my bed, Miss Briefs, it will not be because I paid you to do so.”.....so he does got the hots for her.
And why didn't you kill Yamcha! *seceretly admires Yamcha bashers* hehehe
Perfect tens, although there were a few grammer mistakes, that was it. Can't say anything about the quality of my wok though.....
~Crazy One | Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2002 22:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! Chapters 1,2,&3 are back up!! I'm SO glad that you got everything straightened out. ^_^
Wha-- there's TWO new chapters!! *faints*
*later, pulls self off the floor* Okay I'm ready to read them now! :)
Swan . . . for some reason I remember his discription being like Nappa. *lol* Maybe I need to start this story over. -_-
Funky Tea? I'll say. What the freak is Miranda's game, anyway???
YEAH!!! She killed the bastard, whoo hoo!!! ...I HOPE... damn!! No such luck. *lol*
And Veggie ... "It is isn't it?" ... *faints again* | Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2002 02:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*regains consciousness once more* On to chapter 5!! ^_~
"Experiments?!" Uh oh... NOW I'm worried! (heh) *gets confused with "An Experiment"* (ohmygosh, I'm a hentai! -_-)
*reads AN/Dedication* Awww ... I- I'm ... *eyes start to water and loses her voice*
*after finishing the chapter, finds her voice* He said THAT!?!? O.O *drools* Oh ... my ... gosh!!!! Do I DARE spoil it for those that are reading the reviews first... YES!! "If you ever, by chance find yourself in my bed, Miss Briefs, it will not be because I paid you to do so."
O.O *faints once again*
PS To everyone reading this ... this story is quite good. (that's an understatement!!) And if you tend to like a bit of the--uh-- exotic(o.O) then try her "An Experiment." But I warn you, read only wtih a lemon yearning stomach. ;) |
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