| "First Person Plural" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: aurani On: October 10, 2001 02:46 CDT
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Okay. This is just *so* unbelievably good. its now one in the morning (couldnt stop reading) and i have to remind myself to breath in. THIS IS SO GOOD!!! may i have your permission to add it to my archives? my email address is aurorelite13@hotmail.com and I LOVE YOUR FIC! its so... deep, beautiful (wonderfully happy!!!^^) and well written. AND its 1x2. You just dont find many of those these days. keep up the awesome work, and i'll keep reading. |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: October 11, 2001 16:22 CDT
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I'm sorry... but I disliked this story. And... the end was horrible. You can't have 15 or 16 chapters where everythings fine, and suddenly... poof! Heero wants normal. It just didn't fit with the story. And I wish you hadn't said it was 1x2, since in the end, it clearly was not. I liked your writing style, I didn't like your story or your plot. I know thats mean, and I'm sorry... but good job on the writing, it takes a lot of work to write something so long. @-->--- |
Reviewed By: LindaN On: October 14, 2001 13:01 CDT
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This is an incredible story! You've done well and I thank you for sharing it with us. You are such a gifted writer. Linda |
Reviewed By: Wildfire's Flame On: November 15, 2001 02:07 CST
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Awwww, Kawaii. I loved it very much. ^_^ Poor Duo-chan and Hee-chan. Very well-written. I was totally dragged in adn I loved Duo's multiple personalities. Meyer is my favorite. I love his attitude. Grins. I would love to host this on my site if you would be so knd as to let me? Here'es my link www.angelfire.com/gundam/RoninWarriors/ and you can email me at bhollan2@hotmail.com. Arigatou for a great fic and for considering my request. Lena |
Reviewed By: Jessie On: November 18, 2001 10:45 CST
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Oh, wow. This is a story on a level by it's self. Great story idea and the way it's written is even better. Your ability to yank heart-strings is amazing. I can't say the ending was a surprise; unwanted for sure, but not surprising. Heero is only human. Will the sequal be happier? You left it open for "Happily Ever After." |
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