| "Completely Irresistible" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: great story
Reviewed By: bule_sunflowerz1 On: October 01, 2003 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story I love the idea the spelling wasnt all that great but other then that it was great!!!
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Reviewed By: Vian On: April 17, 2003 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE STORY IS GREAT!but i think there should be some adventure or something....but i think that it's very sweet that they are living together!
Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: invictus On: January 09, 2003 00:09 CST
Comment/Review:
this story is great, though few grammatical errors...the story is just wonderful and hope you continue...please continue |
Reviewed By: fire0ice On: January 06, 2003 15:09 CST
Comment/Review:
going to the chaple and were.../going to get maaarrried...
i love it, two drunks in a cheeze Vagas chaple, classic. ^_^
you clould add a twist like say some old family tradition that for some weird reason they can't get a divorce or annulment without some great loss either in money or family pride.
hey! how about some deal one of their parents made with some company when they joined that their kid can only get married once and can't get a divorce without like say loosing 40% of the company. and of course the parents would never think "their" child would do something stupid like get drunk an enlope/married in Vagas. |
Reviewed By: Lizbethstar On: January 05, 2003 01:04 CST
Comment/Review:
Ure story is soooo good....its original and sorta has a kick 2 it....plz update. |
Reviewed By: Animechick On: November 16, 2002 02:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is really good and original. I don't think i've ever read one quite like this, but I like it. good job and please update soon! |
