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| "Bart-itage III" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Alpha On: June 12, 2003 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't even need to read it all the way to know that it seriously sucked. I have NEVER put any fic down before. In fact, I hate typing this. I just thought that you should know.... It's a bad idea to crossover the simpsons with little of anything. Especially Armitage. Then again, it might be possible. I've just yet to see it. | Reviewed By: TerraMimic On: May 14, 2003 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I normally don't rip on fics, but this one just, well, sucks. I don't even think it qualifies as being in script format. The text wasn't even formatted well enough to make it readable. The storyline concept doesn't fit with the original Armitage storyline like I think you were going for, and it followed the movie to closely to be truly original. When a different person is faced with the same situation, they usually handle it in a different fashion. You should take that into consideration when you write your fics. |
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