| "A Whisper in Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
| Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] |
Reviewed By: arthirius [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2019 15:18 PDT
Comment/Review:
I just wanted to comment on the review that said Meryl was a "slut"
for not being a virgin. What repressed idiotic thinking is that?
She's in her early 20s, pretty, and a grown ass woman. She can do
whatever the fuck she wants. Might be silly for me to defend an
anime/manga character from 20+ years ago in a fanfic but, there you
go XD. BTW, love this story, always come back to it,one of the best
VxM stories
|
Reviewed By: LilBrokenDolly [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 01:44 PDT
Comment/Review:
Holy crap, ladies! This is awesome! So sexy, so angsty... I love it!!! Do write a sequel!!!
|
Reviewed By: Lady Morrigan On: September 17, 2005 01:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. This is really good. If this is what you write when you are bored, I say that you need to have nothing to do more often! I really like this--love and sex, the way it should be, very nice indeed. Hmmm, I wonder if my BF could read this story, he could use the pointers, lol. ^_^
|
Title: great
Reviewed By: Saddness4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 01:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know it that it was good!!
|
Reviewed By: inuyasha88101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 21:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was great you have to write the next one. do some more stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: wh00t On: March 01, 2005 15:47 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay
|
Title: you are good and evil
Reviewed By: meloli On: December 07, 2004 17:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why good and evil, because you wrote so good it's evil to let me hanging like this. WRITE AGAIN! >begs< *sniffle
|
Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Karasunaki17 On: October 21, 2004 16:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was extremely well-written. It defnitely touched me, emotionally. A sequel would wonderful.
|
Reviewed By: EbilJo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 18:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
In relation in Inu Bullet's review: I think it's completely correct that Meryl shouldn't be a virgin. I mean, I'm not lesbian, but she is pretty, and she probably could have lost it when she was younger. I don;t think one of the questions on the Insurance Co. employment forms was "Are you a virgin?" *shiver* If it was, I wouldn't work there. LOL! And the grammar thing: I think slang sounds better than the actual correct way to say things. It gives the author(s) a certain voice, like a personality. Each author has his or her own way of writing, and it's better to have voice than to sound like everyone else. I think this was a really well written one-shot, capturing the inner emotions of the two characters, when they really aren't both percieved on the show. Good job.
|
Reviewed By: Monica On: June 20, 2004 16:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT!!
|
Reviewed By: Demoness_Smut [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 22:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful...Absolutely stunning.I can't believe how well that was written. I would love the sequel...I read one of the previous reviews saying that having Meryl experienced made her a slut...No it didn't it...but anyway...It's fanfiction you can't do anything about what people write..right!? Welll can't wait till the next installment Demoness_Smut
|
Reviewed By: missa-chan On: May 31, 2004 08:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, that has to be one of the BEST VxM fics I've ever read! It was so sweet, and I swear I'm going to have a good day thanks to you and that story! And hey there, do I see something about a sequel!?! I must have a sequel! I need more!!! I am very greedy! I love your writing style, your words are beautiful! Can't wait for more!
|
Reviewed By: lc_chicka On: May 18, 2004 21:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME FIC PLZ MAKE A SEQUEL and like maybe make were like merly gets pregnet or somthin like that,that would be awsome.
|
Reviewed By: Insane Dragoness (FF.Net) On: April 23, 2004 22:45 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
That twas great! I really liked that story!! Please write the sequel!! ^_^
|
Reviewed By: Ceirra On: November 30, 2003 11:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved it! That is one of the best stories I've ever read! ;)
|
| Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] |
