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| "The proposition" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: bishoonenlover On: July 13, 2003 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
*Throwing limes in a toilet*Die limes DIE!*tries to flush but they won't go down*NNNOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
OK that was overdone I like the story and thought it was humorus but it was all LIME!I drink lemonade not LIMEADE! | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: January 10, 2003 05:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MMMMWWWAAAHHHHHAAAHHHAAAAAAA,....*wipe tears from laughing too hard*....MMMMMaaaannnnn does that pink-princess dumb,....*giggles*...to think she actualy ask her dear heero to "guard" her brother,....*snicker*...and to used "whatever means necessary"..to make sured that zechy won't leave his cabin,....*LOL*...MMMMyyyyyyyy GGGGGaaawdddd,.......imagine if she just knew what it is that heero would do to "guard" her brother,.....MMMWAAHAAAAHHAAAAHHHHAAAAAHHHAAAAAA,.......*gasp*....*snicker*....^_^.....
Weeeelll,...that's relena to you,....DDDummbbbbb as a DDDooorrnaaillll as always,....*LOL*....continue soon please,...can't wait to know how much longger it takes before our dear pink-princess FFFinnaallllyyyy get a clue about what's actualy going on,....*snicker*...keep-up the good work,...till yer-next chapter,..JAAAAAAAAAAAAA and GAANBATEEE-NEEE!!^_~!! | Reviewed By: Bejita-ou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, great fic!!! i started laughing at that first line ^_^ oh, btw, i'm Queen Vegeta from FF.net... yah, anyway, i loved the fic ^_^ | Reviewed By: pirate_kit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2002 22:15 CST
Comment/Review:
I always knew he was up to something...'Lightning Count' indeed. ::snickers::
But the fact Relena wouldn't look for Heero with her brother, I think I giggled through the whole thing because of that idea. WEEE! |
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