| "Teach Me to Dance" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: tenshianime On: April 04, 2004 22:32 CDT
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One of my favourite stories! I love the incest between Tai and Kari. Are you going to put up the other two chapters that were originally on FF.net?
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Title: Sequel.
Reviewed By: Angelic Hentai Goddes On: November 23, 2003 18:42 CST
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*Amgelic Hentai Goddes fixes halo, ad adjusts wings and toga before clearing throat* Ah-hem! I think you need a sequel. If the three friends heard it, I think there should be a story that says how THEY felt about it. How does the Outside Party see the two lovers? *flaps wings thoughtfully* Hmmmm. . .Forbidden love is always. . .okay, I guess. It's in nature when you think about it right? A litter mate is the same as a sibling, and THEY have no problem mating, right? *thinks again* Anyway, loved the fic! FF.net is really a little kiddie thing aren't they? Bastards. . . *AHG flies away*
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Reviewed By: Anonimous On: June 27, 2003 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the story but are you going too put the other 2 parts you put on Fanfiction.net |
Reviewed By: mina tsukiyono On: June 20, 2003 14:46 CDT
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Good fic, took me a while to get used to the whole incest thing, but overall a very good fic. I love your writing, keep it up! There was a lot of detail, you're a good writer. |
Reviewed By: kaesar On: June 18, 2003 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic! creative and original un like most fics
on ff.net (cough mary sue's cough) |
Reviewed By: The Last Face [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 05:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Five way! Woohoo!
Excellent work. Very erotic. |
Reviewed By: thelovemutt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm normally a yaoi reader because het fics tend to suck, but I've noticed that het fics that have something out of the ordinary, whether it be incest, bdsm, fetish stuff, whatever, seem to be much better than the rest. This fic kicked ass. |
Reviewed By: Taichi Ishida [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 08:59 CST
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i don't normally read/write incest. but this was a pretty good fic. |
Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 23:42 CST
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Amen to that brother. Incase you didn't know there is a patiton to get back our NC-17 fics on ff.net. please go and sign it so that we can once again read the best damn fics out there. keep writing the good ones and mabey one day we will be able to see them on FF.net once again. |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 12:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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i dont normaly go for incest, but this was good. more! the descriptions were good, but it could be better. i liked this one alot. |
Reviewed By: whitelight101 On: November 09, 2002 13:03 CST
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good descriptions, the pairing was pretty good, keep writing!!! |
Reviewed By: Mastero [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2002 01:12 CST
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Lol, will Daisuke, Miyako and Takeru tell the others? This is the first Increst fic I have read but whatever. What's next, Daisuke and Jun? |
