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| "A Man and a Woman in a Rain of Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: silverdemon87 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... that's all I can really say. You've done a wonderful job capturing Kenshin's thoughts at the time about Tomoe... it's not easy you know ^^ There isn't much information of how Kenshin and Tomoe actually met unless you've watched the OAV Samurai X... I just happen to be one of them... heh... One suggestion though... ^^;; During the Bakumatsu, I'm sure Kenshin had a lot of things going on... Truly, you've managed to capture his thoughts and put it into your fanfic but (yes, there's always a 'but' isn't there?) I think you can go deeper into his mind... I can totally understand what he is thinking but I think, and this is just my opinion, that you could move in farther and give us his ideal of the era he's living in as well as his present comments... Jeez, I'm writing too many long reviews -_-;; so I think I'll stop here. Good luck and please update!!!
| Reviewed By: Mara Amber [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 12:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Irgendwie muß ich dem Mangel an reviews auf MediaMiner mal ein Ende setzen =^^=. Ich mag diese Geschichte immer noch =^^=, alle Charactere sind meiner Meinung nach sehr gut analysiert... falls Dir meine Meinung in diesem Sinne irgendwas bedeutet.
WESENTLICH ausgereifter und differenzierter als vieles, was ich bisher gelesen habe =^^= |
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