| "Promises" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: gofamofa On: September 02, 2003 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its certainly an unique take of Vegeta's life between the time of his planet's destruction and his arrival on Earth. I notice that the last time you edited the story has been for sometime. Please please continue the story real soon. I'll keep an eye out for any other stories that you may have written. You are quite the storyteller.
Hoping to see more of your work real soon. |
Reviewed By: latinadream520 On: January 11, 2003 09:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that this story was very good and entertaining.I'm entersted to read the rest of the story. email me at latinadream520@yahoo.com when you have any more chapters up. Oh, by the way, was the woman at the end of the story that Vegeta was thinking about Bulma? |
