"Aibou" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 ›  » ] |
Reviewed By: shivafiregoddess666 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 22:28 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is an awesome fic! ^_^ Yami coming to life is just too cool! |
Reviewed By: Goldy&YamiGoldy On: December 27, 2002 15:28 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Goldy:This fic is getting better by the minute.
Yami Goldy: I agree, but I don't like to be left hanging!
Goldy & Yami Goldy: FINISH THE FIC ALREADY! |
Reviewed By: Susie On: December 24, 2002 18:35 CST Comment/Review: Yugi needs Yami...I need the next chapter! Eh...perhaps different needs... ^^; Good story, tho... |
Reviewed By: Nkoah On: December 18, 2002 04:05 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh. My. Goddess!!!!! This story is absolutely WONDERFUL! And that is a pure understatement!!!! This is sooooo beautiful!!!!
I have to admit...when I found the link to this website, I had no idea I'd come across this story...I almost started crying when I found it because I had read the first two chapters on Fanfiction.net, and then *poof* -- your story was gone. I then looked and looked for the conclusion or another place where you had uploaded it, using your penname from FanFiction.net and the name of the story and I couldn't find anything. Then, so unexpectedly, I found it here. I couldn't be more pleased with this chapter -- you are so incredibly talented, and I'm so ecstatic that I have found this story once more. Please, please, PLEASE update soon! I need to see what happens!
I'm so happy I found this story again!!! ^-^ Please keep up the good work!!!!
~Nkoah~ |
Reviewed By: KiKi MoToU On: December 18, 2002 21:38 CST Comment/Review: keep writeing!!! |
Reviewed By: angel wings kit On: December 10, 2002 15:00 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i loved it wright more |
Reviewed By: lady of faith On: December 03, 2002 15:17 CST Comment/Review: want more! |
Reviewed By: Katmon{AKA Madame KK} On: December 11, 2002 15:50 CST Comment/Review: This was a very good fic, and I enjoyed it very much!
Ja!
Katmon =^.^= |
Reviewed By: DarkWitch [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 00:15 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG how could you do this to me???!!!
FINISH IT ALREADY!!!! YOU'RE DRIVING ME CRAZY!!! |
Reviewed By: Kari On: November 29, 2002 21:23 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You must continue. PLEASE! And soon. |
Reviewed By: ^_____^ On: November 29, 2002 16:29 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: NO!!!! YOU MUST WRITE MORE!!!!! I'M BEGGING YOU!!!! FOR THE LOVE OF CHOBITS, WRITE MORE!!!!! 0____0 |
Reviewed By: Sadistic Gohan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 16:50 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wonderful, absolutely brilliant! Please continue! |
Reviewed By: Terendel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 16:02 CST Comment/Review: Very good the way you had Yami start out insubstantial. Some very nice interactions between them. Excellent emotional content. Very satisfying. As to the lemon...
Well come on! Don't leave us there. Poor Yugi, trapped in unfinished fic limbo for days with a raging hard-on. Cruel, cruel author. ;-) |
Reviewed By: BleedingAngel&SilentDarkness On: November 27, 2002 17:29 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: BleedingAngel: That was so beautiful!Every comment, every sense of desire! All of it! I just abhor the fact that you left us with a cliffhanger... yet again!
SilentDarkness: Having your readers slip to the very edge of their seats in excitement, simply to leave them with their feelings of restlessness with a cliffhanger, is absolute brilliance.
BleedingAngel: No, it isn't! It's psychological torture! Madness, I tell you! It's badness with a touch of evil! >_
SilentDarkness: *chuckles* According to you, it's a small piece of hell.
BleedingAngel: That's because it is!
SilentDarkness: *shakes her head, still laughing*
BleedingAngel: I hope to see the next chapter soon! Please, post as soon as you can, but don't overwork yourself, okies? ^_^ Remember, Rest and relaxation is the key to happiness! *.* |
Reviewed By: loanshark On: November 27, 2002 13:17 CST Comment/Review: nice!!! *grinz* you FINALLY updated again...haha...that was...cool...
anywayz, can't wait for the next part!! yay!!! |
Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 ›  » ] |