| "Aibou" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: Michiru On: December 06, 2002 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is really really good!!!! Please continue!!! |
Reviewed By: DarkWitch On: November 22, 2002 04:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhhh you're so bad!!!! Why did you stop when it was just getting good???
Argggghhhh this fic is so sweet plesse hurry up!!!! I"m going crazy!!!! |
Reviewed By: RyuArashi On: November 21, 2002 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAH!!! Damn you for leaving us hanging like that!!!You had better finsh this story, or I'll send the Grim Reaper after you...AAAaaarh!
I love this story!!! Finsh it! Finish it! |
Reviewed By: Koryu On: November 15, 2002 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn, no 11s? I am absolutely in love with this story. It's gorgeous! Please, PLEASE write more! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: November 14, 2002 01:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! MOOOOOOOOORRRREEEE!!!! ^_^PLEASE MORE MUST HAVE MORE MUST HAVE MORE MUST HAVVVE MOOOORREE!! REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY SOOOOOOOOOOON! SOON! SOON!^_^ I TOTALLY ABSOLUTELY ADORE AND 100% LOVE THIS FIC TO DEATH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! REALLY! =D PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE HAVE MORE CHAPPY SOON!! (AND MAYBE EVEN GET TO SOME LEMONY FUN??^_~)
(Y+Y4EVER&EVER!) |
Reviewed By: WildWing [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful writing, as always! ^_^ I am in love
with this fic, can't wait for the next part! |
Reviewed By: Shorty22 On: November 13, 2002 14:53 CST
Comment/Review:
I must say I agree with BleedingAngel&SilentDarkness. Your story is so vivid! The interactions between them, just... wow!
Although, I must mention the red eyes/lighting the candle scene in the first chapter. I'm not sure why, seeing as how I loved several scenes in the story, since many were just so elaborate, but there's just something in that one scene. The unintentional fright from Yami's seemingly curiousity of Yugi's doings, perhaps... the whole innocence of the scene. I don't know why I'm making it such a big deal. ^-^;
I can't wait to see the next part. (EVIL cliffhanger! ^-^;; ) |
Reviewed By: BleedingAngel&SilentDarkness On: November 12, 2002 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BleedingAngel: oh, oh... *in pleasurable awe* Your elaborations are enchanting. I can nearly feel the soft skin of Yami's face... taste the sweetness of Yugi's lips... and hear the increasing thumps of their hearts beneath their flesh. Your writing is amazing.
SilentDarkness: The gentle flickerings of candle light, and the illuminations of flame... the vivid descriptions of the sensual atmosphere...
BleedingAngel: And let's not forget the way Yami's unsolidified form is awakened through words. I shall not lie. I physically shivered when reading the small interactions Yugi attemtped to make with his darker half. Cool air gliding over fingers... *sighs dreamily*
SilentDarkness: I must agree.
BleedingAngel: Please, post the third part. I'll be anticipating it ^_~ |
Reviewed By: ccam3 On: November 12, 2002 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm...it cool -_o |
Reviewed By: loanshark [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2002 16:47 CST
Comment/Review:
nice!!! *squeals* i love this so far...WHY DID U PUT A CLIFFIE??? *sobs* anyway, great job, please update soon!!! :) |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: November 12, 2002 12:16 CST
Comment/Review:
This is still great. Keep up the good work. Hope you post more soon! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: November 09, 2002 19:52 CST
Comment/Review:
This is great! Please update soon! Great descriptions! |
Reviewed By: whitelight101 On: November 09, 2002 11:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome nice pairing and description!! |
Reviewed By: loanshark [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2002 10:01 CST
Comment/Review:
very nice!! i really like this story...update soon!! :) |
Reviewed By: BleedingAngel&SilentDarkness On: November 09, 2002 23:14 CST
Comment/Review:
BleedingAngel: This has enraptured me.
SilentDarkness: Indeed. This is utterly spell- binding.
BleedingAngel: Yeah! Please write more! ^_^ |
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