| "Aibou" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: WildWing [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful writing, as always! ^_^ I am in love
with this fic, can't wait for the next part! |
Reviewed By: Shorty22 On: November 13, 2002 14:53 CST
Comment/Review:
I must say I agree with BleedingAngel&SilentDarkness. Your story is so vivid! The interactions between them, just... wow!
Although, I must mention the red eyes/lighting the candle scene in the first chapter. I'm not sure why, seeing as how I loved several scenes in the story, since many were just so elaborate, but there's just something in that one scene. The unintentional fright from Yami's seemingly curiousity of Yugi's doings, perhaps... the whole innocence of the scene. I don't know why I'm making it such a big deal. ^-^;
I can't wait to see the next part. (EVIL cliffhanger! ^-^;; ) |
Reviewed By: BleedingAngel&SilentDarkness On: November 12, 2002 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BleedingAngel: oh, oh... *in pleasurable awe* Your elaborations are enchanting. I can nearly feel the soft skin of Yami's face... taste the sweetness of Yugi's lips... and hear the increasing thumps of their hearts beneath their flesh. Your writing is amazing.
SilentDarkness: The gentle flickerings of candle light, and the illuminations of flame... the vivid descriptions of the sensual atmosphere...
BleedingAngel: And let's not forget the way Yami's unsolidified form is awakened through words. I shall not lie. I physically shivered when reading the small interactions Yugi attemtped to make with his darker half. Cool air gliding over fingers... *sighs dreamily*
SilentDarkness: I must agree.
BleedingAngel: Please, post the third part. I'll be anticipating it ^_~ |
Reviewed By: ccam3 On: November 12, 2002 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm...it cool -_o |
Reviewed By: loanshark [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2002 16:47 CST
Comment/Review:
nice!!! *squeals* i love this so far...WHY DID U PUT A CLIFFIE??? *sobs* anyway, great job, please update soon!!! :) |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: November 12, 2002 12:16 CST
Comment/Review:
This is still great. Keep up the good work. Hope you post more soon! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: November 09, 2002 19:52 CST
Comment/Review:
This is great! Please update soon! Great descriptions! |
Reviewed By: whitelight101 On: November 09, 2002 11:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome nice pairing and description!! |
Reviewed By: loanshark [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2002 10:01 CST
Comment/Review:
very nice!! i really like this story...update soon!! :) |
Reviewed By: BleedingAngel&SilentDarkness On: November 09, 2002 23:14 CST
Comment/Review:
BleedingAngel: This has enraptured me.
SilentDarkness: Indeed. This is utterly spell- binding.
BleedingAngel: Yeah! Please write more! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: ElderWhisp [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MmmmmmmmmmmMmmmmmmmmmmmm! Yummy Lemon! |
Reviewed By: Terendel On: November 10, 2002 10:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying it so far. Yami and Yugi in the dark sounds like fun, but I really want to see more of it. |
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