| "The Miracles of San Juan" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Switch On: December 21, 2002 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Don't get that 5 for enjoyment factor wrong. I really really really enjoyed your fic, until the last chapter!!!!! POOR HEERO!!!!! He's going to be all alone!!!! I mean, of course Duo will be there, BUT HE'S A WHALE FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!!!!!! Heero Is Still Going To Be Alone!!!! I thought it was going to end all happily where Duo wanted to stay with Heero and they'd live happily ever after!!!! *Sobs uncontrollably* Please make an alternate ending!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *continues sobbing* |
Reviewed By: Tobe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2002 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, here's the deal...it's a great story, and I love the plot and everything but there were a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. I suggest that after you write a section that you go over it and make sure everything makes sense. After that you should get someone to edit it for you to find the mistakes--if any--that you missed. But it's your decision and all and I hope you continue to write and please hurry and finish this story because I wanna know what happens next. Well anyways good luck with writing!
Tobe |
Reviewed By: Elle-FaTe2x1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 17:37 CST
Comment/Review:
poor u I hope you get better. This is however a very cruel cliff hanger very very cruel love the story thou! |
Reviewed By: lavafrog On: November 17, 2002 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic!! I haven't read any other fic with a similar plot, and an original fic is a good fic! Plus, I love 1x2, so any fic with that couple just can't go wrong. The only reason why I rated the fic lower on spelling and grammar is because there were a bunch of typos, but nothing terrible. Continue the fic soon please!! |
Reviewed By: siraye On: November 09, 2002 14:16 CST
Comment/Review:
i really like the idea of miracles! |
