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Title: that's great!
Reviewed By: liko On: June 18, 2005 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great! and your grammer goods, and spelling is fabulous! and you kept all of them in character...great job! is shizuru really a perv?(just wondering). anyhow...great job...update soon!
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Reviewed By: DoreeFT [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 17:46 CST
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Loved it how Kuruma chased Kuwabara around the garden and then tried to give him to Hiei. Loved Hiei's commentary saying that it's good for practice but not worth keeping. That must have been a real blow for Kuwabara. I enjoyed this story so much. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: DoreeFT [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 17:46 CST
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I'm happy that Kuruma is growing quickly. As cute as he is, I wouldn't want him stuck in that fox form too long, after all, he still needs to get romantic with Hiei, ha, ha, ha.
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Reviewed By: DoreeFT [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 17:45 CST
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That scene where Kuruma tries to give Hiei the rose is definitely my favourite. I could just imagine it in my head, tiny little fox trying to drag that big rose. And the funniest thing about it was that Hiei didn't even get it. Ah, if only they'd had a camera, Kuwabara and Yusuke would definitely have had some blackmail material.
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Reviewed By: DoreeFT [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 17:44 CST
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I was afraid the boys would either burn poor Kuruma or drown him. Luckily Hiei has some brains and made the smart decision not to wash him after all. All of their suggestions were actually quite amusing, if Kuruma were really an animal, but… he isn't. Well, not really anyway.
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Reviewed By: DoreeFT [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is just toooo cute how Kuruma sits on Hiei's head. So adorable how he buries his face-snout? into Hiei's hair. I just love it how no matter how much Hiei pushes him away, Kuruma manages to attach himself to Hiei again. I would have liked to see Kuruma get up a bit further than Hiei's knee, that would have been too good. --"He's *eating* him!" Kuwabara screamed, fury at the torture of adorable animals making him livid enough to nearly brain Yusuke with his fists. "That monster! Hiei, you monster!"-- I have to say this is probably my favourite line from this fic so far. It's too funny. Most of this story is funny!
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Reviewed By: DoreeFT [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it how Botan's not scared of Hiei, it makes their interactions hilarious. If I were Hiei, I'd be worried for my life. Botan's, ahem, 'driving', doesn't seem to be too safe. I know Hiei's an A-class demon, but I don't think even he could survive such a steep drop, ha, ha, ha. And that part where they asked Mukuro's permission to use Hiei. Sigh, poor Hiei, feeling more and more like an object by the moment, ha, ha, ha. --Hiei looked...disheveled-- That's just too funny!!! The scene where Kuruma in his fox form hides in Hiei's clothing is just too funny. I especially loved the way you wrote Hiei's reaction. It's too priceless. Yeah, too priceless. Hiei has to play parent! I knew something like this was going to happen. Now I can't wait to read chapter two!
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 03:04 CST
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Actually, I thought that that fluff was quite funny. A couple things though: Kuwabara's eyes are brown as far as I know and he calls Yukina "Yukina-san" not "Yukina-sama." Besides that, I think that this is an absolutely adorable fanfic that is worth continuing.
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 03:03 CST
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Actually, I thought that that fluff was quite funny. A couple things though: Kuwabara's eyes are brown as far as I know and he calls Yukina "Yukina-san" not "Yukina-sama." Besides that, I think that this is an absolutely adorable fanfic that is worth continuing.
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 01:59 CST
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I just have to point out the small fact that no matter what objects weigh, they fall at the same speed.
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Reviewed By: fire and napalm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 20:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THat's so adorable!!! It's just unfair you aren't updating these more often! Yuo hav e so many good and unfinished stories its cruel! Plaese update some soon.
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Reviewed By: HieiLover#? On: July 03, 2004 06:49 CDT
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Yay!!! You updated!!! Go you!!! Now then, write more!!! ^__~
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Title: Wonderfull
Reviewed By: kit_Airiden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^________________^ CONGRADULATIONS!!!!!!! you have just replaced my fororite yyh fic. it's so good I freaked out when I realized that there wasn't another chapter it's must have been quite a laugh to see my face. It's so cute would you mind me drawing some thing on it? I can't wait till he starts getting older and seeing how he reacts........He seems to treat kazuma like his personal "fox toy" it's origional. I'm wondering when he will slowly retain his other form before he turns human hahahaha how will Hiei feel chasing around a 5 year old yoko??? lol think of all the questions.......bwhahaha my friend who's sitting next to me is going on about potty training or some thing >_< all in all it's really good with even more potential as the plot may continue. I do hope you continue.
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Reviewed By: SomaliChan On: June 20, 2004 08:58 CDT
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Wow~ It's really been a long time. Hope your next update wouldn't take so long *keeps fingers crossed* Love Kurama in this young kitsune form. More please?
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Reviewed By: fox flame On: June 18, 2004 18:10 CDT
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yay...after a very long...ahem....year! yu updated!!! plleeeeaaaasseeee do more....buh quikly...uz it soooo goood!!-fox
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