| "Indebted" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jen of the Wildfire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 01:30 CST
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I love this story! It's so cute, and funny(especially the bit where baby fox Kurama is in the leg of Hiei's pants while Yusuke's rolling on the floor laughing his head off)! You write more, I read! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Jennn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. I wonder if Keiko will get bit. |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 08:51 CST
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Interesting how Hiei views ningen babies vs. youkai babies. I'm thinking he IS the best "parent" for the baby youko right now.
Cute ending to Chapter 3, with Hiei stroking the kitsune's fur. |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: January 31, 2003 13:02 CST
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Aw, it's such a cute little story. Very interesting for Hiei. Can't wait for the rest! |
Reviewed By: Neko-Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 22:54 CST
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CUTE!!!! MORE SOON PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 16:41 CST
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This is so cute! Please continue! |
Reviewed By: Jennn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the way you ended this chapter. It's going to be hard waiting for the next one. Good work! |
Reviewed By: Kearin Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 19:07 CST
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awwwwwwwwww!!! I don't normally read YYH fanfiction, but when I saw it was one of your fics, Arigatomina, I *had* to read it!! ^.^ I'm soooo glad I did!! I want to read more!! I'm utterly addicted.. I want a cute little baby Kurama!!! Awwwwww!!! |
Reviewed By: jennn On: January 16, 2003 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave a ten for everything, because of the talent and not one mistake that I noticed. I enjoyed the story a lot. It's funny, yet serious.
Keep up the good work. Sorry, I was too lazy to log in. |
Reviewed By: Neko-Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 16:11 CST
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More soon please!!! This story is really good. |
Reviewed By: Elena On: January 01, 2003 13:46 CST
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OMG, You absolutely have to finish this story !!! It is soo funny. I love it. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: Elbereth in April On: December 27, 2002 15:27 CST
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This was pretty funny. Are you going to write more? |
Reviewed By: Neko-Yasha (not loged in) On: December 16, 2002 11:38 CST
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Please write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Sheiakurei On: November 28, 2002 00:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg.. that was.. rofl..
That is like.. so cute.. rofl.. funny.. rofl
I can't wait to read the rest and for anymore updates on this Lol. (My account has been stollen thats why I'm not on it btw)
Update soon. Loved it!! |
Reviewed By: HontouTempest [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2002 21:39 CST
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That is soooo funny! I can picture Hiei, so mad that he is steaming, and Kurama, a baby fox, on top of Hiei's head. PLEASE HURRY AND FINISH THIS STORY!!! |
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