| "Lemon! A Girl's Fantasy Comes True!" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: VegetaDaimoh1 On: January 31, 2005 11:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed it, although w/lina's drawn explanations it kinda lessoned the mood. she was also a little more than i thought she'd normally be.
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Reviewed By: B.B. On: September 08, 2004 05:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED IT! One of the most in character fics I've ever read. I liked the fact that it was romantic without being mushy. I wish I had been Gourry's "teacher" ;-)
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Reviewed By: wicked witch of the southeast On: April 15, 2004 12:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
*gives Lina a gold coin* SO FUNNY XD Write more like this, you're really good at it
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Reviewed By: Xellia On: December 22, 2002 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd teach Gourry a thing or two! ^o^ |
Reviewed By: Carrie On: December 16, 2002 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too damn funny and awfully sweet. Gourry and Lina's wedding night was as humorous as can be! |
Reviewed By: Tramp [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 09:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NIIIIIIIICCE!!!!! I it's funny just how simple-minded Gourry is. I liked how Lina explained things to him though. The sex was fun too. |
Reviewed By: BratG [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 18:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Great job!
This was FUNNY as hell... I couldn't help but laugh. You are the first author that I've read that has captured Gourry's innocense completely! not to mention that everything flows smoothly and it's in character.
Great job! |
Reviewed By: kima On: December 04, 2002 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PHAT! I loved this, it's so wonderful. |
Reviewed By: TLC On: December 04, 2002 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go Lina! Go Gourry! Nice sexy lemon ya got here. |
